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melodic symphony of chimes … at crimson twilight…from a temple on a serene seaside ignited a blissful awe in the mind of a child, after she played joyfully with the sapphire rolling waves …. memory of that awe-inspiring cadence soaring to the gossamer horizon serenade me to a forest of dreams, with crooning Koels and Bulbuls perched on saffron-scented bushes singing their delightful songs, when at tangerine dusk I am to myself, I hear gentle humming of a stream descending from a chartreuse waterfalls, that reminiscence brings me back to the tranquil seaside with rolling sapphire waves ~ reminding me of an illusory life, which gently tip-toes away... melodic symphony of chimes! I am mesmerized! I feel a gush of lavender emotions run through my veins, to recapture this surreal indescribable kaleidoscopic experience in words … I find a purpose which inspires my lilac imagination spread its wings and rise to the horizon …at crimson twilight..with tranquil cadence of chimes. July 22, 2021 "Finding Your Muse" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh SECOND PLACE (Premiere Contest)

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Date: 8/3/2021 8:58:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Love your line "I feel a gush of lavender emotions run through my veins," I love lavender. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/2/2021 5:54:00 PM
Love this! Congrats on a top win in my contest. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/2/2021 6:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina, for the placement. It's an honour.
Date: 8/2/2021 5:52:00 AM
I feel a gush of lavender emotions run through my veins, - Very beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win!
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