Reverie In Open Air

I acknowledge my status as a stranger inappropriate clothes old habits out of sync with wasp 
and wren i admit i dont know how to sit still or move with purpose i prefer books to moonlight 
statuary to trees but this lawn has been leveled for looking so i kick off my sandal's and walk 
it's cool green who claims were mere muscle and fluids? my feet are the primitives here as 
for the rest ah the air now is a tonic of absence, bearing nothing but news of a breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 8:12 AM
The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Bianca. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 8:03 PM
amazing work. very yes. reminds me of e.e. cummings
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December 7, 2009 at 4:07 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup B'Unxle. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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