Reverie

 Reverie … 
 
Maybe I was dreaming, the season was the spring, 
Blissful, joyful, youthful, I lived it like a king. 
 
Maybe I was dreaming, when the mirror was my friend. 
hair was black as midnight, and smiles were not pretend. 
 
Maybe I was dreaming of running back and forth, 
running after sunset or wind that came from north. 
 
Maybe I was dreaming, my dream was young and bold, 
Now my days are gloomy and nights are getting cold. 
 
Maybe I was dreaming, mom was there with a smile 
Hugged me, kissed me, and loved me, even for a while. 

Maybe I was dreaming, when flying with no wing. 
Dancing dauntless, and thinking, death will never sing. 

Maybe I was dreaming the sweetest dream of all,  
Laughing with my father while tears began to fall. 
 
Maybe I was dreaming, when playing hide and seek,  
Woke up one day, found out I am sick and also weak. 
 
Let me be in dreamland do not wake me up. 
In dreams, I am drunken, pour me one more cup. 

Let me be in dreamland, the sky is brighter there, 
I am always blissful, and love to breathe that air.  
 
Let me be in dreamland, like children I can run. 
Like dawn in the mornings, who melts in loving sun. 

Let me be in dreamland, my days are always dark. 
Darkness is so painful; all I need is a spark. 
 
Let me be in dreamland, “Haloo” lives in dreams. 
He knows what the dreams are as sweet as it seems. 

4/13/2022   Haloo

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Date: 10/18/2022 2:17:00 AM
Pashang, I never saw this before. Today is 10/18/2022! Itis marvelous, poetess. I, too am older. ButI dream when awake. I can’t remember dreams, so I must recall the past joys, loves when awake. Pretty odd, I guess. I see Connie blessed your POTD…that was No dream. Yet she is gone, that loving being. By the way, my days are bright and sparkling as aChristmas tree…no matter what! Huggs,Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/2/2023 11:09:00 AM
I was referencing Connie Wong, a poetess here who died a few months ago. Her comment is on your POTD. Pangie
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/2/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thank you my dear. What do you mean Connie is gone?
Date: 8/3/2022 4:25:00 PM
Fabulous dreaming Pashang! Dreamland is such a forgiving place. Linda
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/6/2022 11:52:00 PM
Thank you my dear Linda
Date: 8/1/2022 11:58:00 PM
WONDERFUL Your poem has charmed me. Running through last phase only DREAMS of Golden Bygone Days are my companions Blessings
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/6/2022 11:52:00 PM
You are so wonderful Anisha.
Date: 8/1/2022 6:26:00 PM
I'm glad I found this, Pashang. I dream of my children around me and wake to find they've grown and live somewhere else. Elizabeth
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/6/2022 11:51:00 PM
Indeed Elizabeth... Thank you for stopping by
Date: 4/25/2022 11:48:00 AM
Excellent write and rhyme to this wonderful piece. love phyl
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:50:00 PM
Thank you my dear...
Date: 4/22/2022 9:01:00 PM
Wow, so lucid the dreams, somewhere to visit in times of woe. the poetry is wonderful, and yes i remember the mirror, one i try to avoid these days. Congrats on POTD well deserved.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Harry you're always kind to me.
Date: 4/18/2022 3:14:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD, Pashang, well deserved:)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo, I really appreciate it.
Date: 4/17/2022 5:17:00 PM
I love this uplifting dreamy poem Pashang. I have had dreams that I still recall vividly from 50 years ago. When they are wonderful dreams it seems we never forget them. I wish you happy dreams to come my friend. Congratulations on your POTD honor. You wrote this with such a pleasant lyrical cadence I enjoyed reading every word and could relate perfectly to growing old. I am putting this into my Faves! Excellent! Blessings xxoo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/9/2023 12:54:00 PM
RIP
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:52:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, what else can I do but dream.
Date: 4/16/2022 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Pashang. We all wish for life to be happy and free of pain and sickness, but alas there come times when we have to face reality!! ~ Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:53:00 PM
Indeed Paul... Indeed.
Date: 4/15/2022 7:17:00 PM
In a dream, anything is possible. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Congratulations Pashang, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:54:00 PM
Thank you Brandy four beautiful comments.
Date: 4/15/2022 2:35:00 PM
A fav, automatically. A wonderful, universal poem...which of us has not held one, more or all of your thoughts? Congratulations and a huge bouquet of Roses on this awesome poem.Celebrate with honor! Panagiota
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:55:00 PM
Thank you for the bouquet of roses. You are so kind.
Date: 4/15/2022 1:16:00 PM
Good to see poem Of the day Pashang. And I note with a, lucid elusive dream write That touches in spots similarity that others Might have felt, through the numb hands of Night and the intrusions and illusions that Can flow our way.'
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Joe for being a great friend. Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Date: 4/15/2022 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet. What you have said, is true for all of us. We want to be in a dreamland, for ever..and never realize there are sickness, pain, loss, and death. deep feelings rendered! BW ~ Mala
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Mala... I think this is the first time I've seen you on my page... Hope is not the last time.
Date: 4/15/2022 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. It is a lovely poem.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Janet for a wonderful comment.
Date: 4/15/2022 10:58:00 AM
Pashang, this is a lovely reverie, and a thought-provoking write about aging and looking back upon our idyllic memories. I especially enjoyed the line "I am always blissful, and love to breathe that air." Thank you for sharing these dreams, congratulations for your poem of the day selection ~ John
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thank you John, I am always in dreamland
Date: 4/15/2022 9:55:00 AM
The bliss of dreams, Congrats on POTD
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:01:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 4/15/2022 8:51:00 AM
Wow! Dream Adventure and joy-filled. Each line is a joy to read. Congratulations!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:02:00 PM
Thank you very much for a wonderful comment.
Date: 4/15/2022 8:10:00 AM
Hello Pashang, I enjoyed this poem. Sometiemes when I have a good dream, i do not want to wake up. Congratulationd on the PDTO win. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2022 3:58:00 AM
Hello Pashang so a m i still dreaming. Enjoyyour day my friend.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:03:00 PM
Hello Darlene... me too... I'm still dreaming.
Date: 4/15/2022 7:51:00 AM
Pashang, lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:07:00 PM
Thank you my dear.
Date: 4/15/2022 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful POTD, Congratulations! :)Paulette
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:08:00 PM
thank you...
Date: 4/15/2022 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A creative/fun write. Dreamland can be a wonderful place to run to. Love It. Have a Blessed Day and Blessed Easter.......................
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:08:00 PM
Thanks a million...
Date: 4/15/2022 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:07:00 PM
Thanks...
Date: 4/15/2022 6:42:00 AM
Wow Pashang a moving write, dreamland is an escape for us all, can't imagine how sad it must be to be insomniac. Congratulations for POTD, so richly deserved - hope you are enjoying the day and the honor bestowed on you. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:06:00 PM
Wow back to you my dear Jennifer... You are so nice.
Date: 4/15/2022 6:31:00 AM
Dreamland is important. Congratulations for POTD :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Heidi...
Date: 4/15/2022 4:38:00 AM
Dreamland is the place to be Pashang! What an excellent write!! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/30/2022 5:04:00 PM
Always...
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