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reverberations

this might only take a moment ~ but perhaps could last a trillion more 

echoed cause to its consequence ~ you were always just my guarantor

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David Kavanagh

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2024

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Sally Eslinger Date: 11/13/2024 9:12:00 AM HiDavid! I’ve been out of the Shower oup a while. Reverberations happen in our universe of physics, math, music, images, consequences, firces, rippling…we are but a part of the equation in your poem. Reminds me a bit of the art top of your page. We have seats on the echo streams. Great penning. xoxo Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/13/2024 10:37:00 AM Heya Sally hope you are keeping well and staying comfortable, I agree all the qualities you mention above are rippling through the universe, although I could be going a little further here, saying human consciousness is the guarantor that bridges them all together, thanks so much for kind comment, cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 11/9/2024 1:10:00 PM …Or a repercussion of what’s yet to come from a red wave of repercussions !! Striking, running out of words to describe your trillion ku's , David lol. Cheered me up for a moment! :D Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/9/2024 2:23:00 PM I wonder what actually caused his consequence, some demon perhaps lol! Yes there’s always reverberations/repercussions spreading out from the source, not all are bad though, some are actually serendipitous, like your comment here Anaya, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/9/2024 8:47:00 AM I enjoyed reading your write. You are making the reader think. That is a good thing. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............... Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/9/2024 10:20:00 AM Thanks Paula, sometimes these one liners can indeed give the reader food for thought, and a few different interpretations, which is a good thing, cheers David

Lin Lane Date: 11/9/2024 8:09:00 AM It's not only out in space that reverberations are heard and felt. I suspect we'll be hearing and feeling certain consequences for the next four YEARS... years ~ years ~ years. Space echoes are much more interesting. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/9/2024 8:34:00 AM I always had more than space in mind when writing this one Lin, indeed all causes have unpredictable and unseen consequences, some are safe and beneficial, some let’s say are extremely dangerous! Cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/9/2024 5:18:00 AM Mind boggling for sure David, they're still picking up a hum from the big bang millions of years ago, does it ever end. Tom Login to Reply Tom Cunningham Date: 11/9/2024 6:06:00 AM Lol lol lol lol David Kavanagh Date: 11/9/2024 5:47:00 AM Heya Tom, One cause, and an infinite amount of consequences later, the reverberations are still being felt, hard to know if random chaos is the guarantor (it’s a preposterous universe) cheers David, cheers David