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reverberations

this might only take a moment ~ but perhaps could last a trillion more echoed cause to its consequence ~ you were always just my guarantor By David Kavanagh

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 11/13/2024 9:12:00 AM

HiDavid! I’ve been out of the Shower oup a while. Reverberations happen in our universe of physics, math, music, images, consequences, firces, rippling…we are but a part of the equation in your poem. Reminds me a bit of the art top of your page. We have seats on the echo streams. Great penning. xoxo

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/13/2024 10:37:00 AM

Heya Sally hope you are keeping well and staying comfortable, I agree all the qualities you mention above are rippling through the universe, although I could be going a little further here, saying human consciousness is the guarantor that bridges them all together, thanks so much for kind comment, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/9/2024 2:35:00 PM

The way you personify creation David - the voice from the heavens - I mean what else can we do but listen lol I get Morgan Freeman vibes just reading this... Let this be a lesson to all the pawns out there. Well written and unique - I think you should send this one to the New Yorker

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/9/2024 3:11:00 PM

Hey I like that idea Dilly, would probably need a caricature and a new title above it (My god what have we done) lol! I honestly hadn’t got anyone in mind when writing, probably subconsciously leaning towards creation, great comment lol! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/9/2024 1:10:00 PM

…Or a repercussion of what’s yet to come from a red wave of repercussions !! Striking, running out of words to describe your trillion ku's , David lol. Cheered me up for a moment! :D

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/9/2024 2:23:00 PM

I wonder what actually caused his consequence, some demon perhaps lol! Yes there’s always reverberations/repercussions spreading out from the source, not all are bad though, some are actually serendipitous, like your comment here Anaya, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/9/2024 8:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. You are making the reader think. That is a good thing. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/9/2024 10:20:00 AM

Thanks Paula, sometimes these one liners can indeed give the reader food for thought, and a few different interpretations, which is a good thing, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 11/9/2024 8:09:00 AM

It's not only out in space that reverberations are heard and felt. I suspect we'll be hearing and feeling certain consequences for the next four YEARS... years ~ years ~ years. Space echoes are much more interesting.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/9/2024 8:34:00 AM

I always had more than space in mind when writing this one Lin, indeed all causes have unpredictable and unseen consequences, some are safe and beneficial, some let’s say are extremely dangerous! Cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/9/2024 5:18:00 AM

Mind boggling for sure David, they're still picking up a hum from the big bang millions of years ago, does it ever end. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 11/9/2024 6:06:00 AM

Lol lol lol lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/9/2024 5:47:00 AM

Heya Tom, One cause, and an infinite amount of consequences later, the reverberations are still being felt, hard to know if random chaos is the guarantor (it’s a preposterous universe) cheers David, cheers David