reverberations

this might only take a moment ~ but perhaps could last a trillion more 

echoed cause to its consequence ~ you were always just my guarantor

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David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Eslinger Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:12 AM
HiDavid! I’ve been out of the Shower oup a while. Reverberations happen in our universe of physics, math, music, images, consequences, firces, rippling…we are but a part of the equation in your poem. Reminds me a bit of the art top of your page. We have seats on the echo streams. Great penning. xoxo
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Heya Sally hope you are keeping well and staying comfortable, I agree all the qualities you mention above are rippling through the universe, although I could be going a little further here, saying human consciousness is the guarantor that bridges them all together, thanks so much for kind comment, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 1:10 PM
…Or a repercussion of what’s yet to come from a red wave of repercussions !! Striking, running out of words to describe your trillion ku's , David lol. Cheered me up for a moment! :D
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 2:23 PM
I wonder what actually caused his consequence, some demon perhaps lol! Yes there’s always reverberations/repercussions spreading out from the source, not all are bad though, some are actually serendipitous, like your comment here Anaya, cheers David
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 8:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. You are making the reader think. That is a good thing. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Thanks Paula, sometimes these one liners can indeed give the reader food for thought, and a few different interpretations, which is a good thing, cheers David
Lane Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 8:09 AM
It's not only out in space that reverberations are heard and felt. I suspect we'll be hearing and feeling certain consequences for the next four YEARS... years ~ years ~ years. Space echoes are much more interesting.
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November 9, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I always had more than space in mind when writing this one Lin, indeed all causes have unpredictable and unseen consequences, some are safe and beneficial, some let’s say are extremely dangerous! Cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Mind boggling for sure David, they're still picking up a hum from the big bang millions of years ago, does it ever end. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Lol lol lol lol
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Heya Tom, One cause, and an infinite amount of consequences later, the reverberations are still being felt, hard to know if random chaos is the guarantor (it’s a preposterous universe) cheers David, cheers David
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