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Reverberates

A gentle cool spring rain falls down Saturating blossoms fair Daffodils with lowered sweet heads Wait without a care Sunshine covered with clouds very gray Raindrops cleanse the spring air Flowers receive moisture's rebirth Out to play children's prayer Spring fever is in the cool air Birds' mating calls echo So lively are the pairs' display Resounds in the meadow Sunshine covered with clouds very gray Raindrops cleanse the spring air Flowers receive moisture's rebirth Out to play children's prayer Dripdrops reverberates 'pon roof Spring fever gets one down Let sunshine peak through the cold cloud Rainbows appear like clowns Sunshine covered with clouds very gray Raindrops cleanse the spring air Flowers receive moisture's rebirth Out to play children's prayer Sleepy Star Magnolia awaken Gentle spring rain renewed Rain 'pon my dampened window pane Somewhat blurs scene as viewed Sunshine covered with clouds very gray Rain drops cleanse the spring air Flowers receive moisture's rebirth Out to play children's prayer Finis Sponsor: POETESS DARKlY Contest: Spring Fever

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Date: 3/13/2014 1:10:00 AM
Sara this is beautiful n springy ! Congrats on great win.
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Date: 3/12/2014 10:13:00 PM
Very nice. Your spring sounds like ours but today was gorgeous. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/12/2014 11:34:00 AM
It sounds like someone wants spring to be here. A lovely win Sara....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 3/11/2014 7:20:00 PM
This is even sweeter than the other, I can't wait to see a flower. Congrad's on your Spring win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2014 11:47:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations, with your big win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:56:00 AM
congrats my dear...a lovely poem. BG
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:19:00 AM
Beautifully written... Imagery of spring... Love this one... Well done... :)s and hugs... Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/11/2014 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Sara! Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine!
Date: 3/11/2014 8:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 3/11/2014 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed this brilliant piece, sara
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:59:00 PM
You write of nature better than anyone I know, even better than me (If I'm good?)! I love that you focus on Spring (I see that is the contest requirement) as that is our hope for a season to come...very soon! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem her this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/26/2014 1:26:00 PM
Who again can weave this? A classic one that will win any day.Simply brilliant.
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Date: 2/26/2014 10:45:00 AM
what joy to read this delightful piece fulfilling nature's request for the coming of spring.. you are fantastic, sara!.. huggs
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:30:00 AM
Sara, I really enjoyed this!! The picture painted was very soothing.. Excellent work my friend!!Asavvy1
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