Reverberates

A gentle cool spring rain falls down
Saturating blossoms fair
Daffodils with lowered sweet heads
Wait without a care

Sunshine covered with clouds very gray
Raindrops cleanse the spring air 
Flowers receive moisture's rebirth
Out to play children's prayer

Spring fever is in the cool air
Birds' mating calls echo
So lively are the pairs' display
Resounds in the meadow

Sunshine covered with clouds very gray
Raindrops cleanse the spring air
Flowers receive moisture's rebirth
Out to play children's prayer

Dripdrops reverberates 'pon roof
Spring fever gets one down
Let sunshine peak through the cold cloud 
Rainbows appear like clowns

Sunshine covered with clouds very gray
Raindrops cleanse the spring air
Flowers receive moisture's rebirth
Out to play children's prayer

Sleepy Star Magnolia awaken
Gentle spring rain renewed
Rain 'pon my dampened window pane
Somewhat blurs scene as viewed

Sunshine covered with clouds very gray
Rain drops cleanse the spring air
Flowers receive moisture's rebirth
Out to play children's prayer

Finis
Sponsor: POETESS DARKlY
Contest: Spring Fever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 1:10 AM
Sara this is beautiful n springy ! Congrats on great win.
Johnson Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Very nice. Your spring sounds like ours but today was gorgeous. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Horsch Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 11:34 AM
It sounds like someone wants spring to be here. A lovely win Sara....Hugs.....Roger
Guzzi Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 7:20 PM
This is even sweeter than the other, I can't wait to see a flower. Congrad's on your Spring win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Sara, Congratulations, with your big win! ~SKAT~
Gorelick Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:56 AM
congrats my dear...a lovely poem. BG
Walker  Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Beautifully written... Imagery of spring... Love this one... Well done... :)s and hugs... Verlena
Walker  Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on the win Sara! Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine!
May Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Congrats on your win Sara
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 1:07 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed this brilliant piece, sara
Sivey Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:59 PM
You write of nature better than anyone I know, even better than me (If I'm good?)! I love that you focus on Spring (I see that is the contest requirement) as that is our hope for a season to come...very soon! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem her this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Kayode Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 1:26 PM
Who again can weave this? A classic one that will win any day.Simply brilliant.
Onclaud Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 10:45 AM
what joy to read this delightful piece fulfilling nature's request for the coming of spring.. you are fantastic, sara!.. huggs
Pickett Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Sara, I really enjoyed this!! The picture painted was very soothing.. Excellent work my friend!!Asavvy1
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