Revenge Is Sweet

REVENGE IS SWEET Once upon a time almost toothless The hunchback hag picked ~ a juicy red apple ~ With malicious intent Toward her stepdaughter foe The sinful fruit ~ perfectly round ~ Like her snow white face The mirror mocks The wrinkled old witch As she removes the core ~ the apple’s heart ~ Her oar-like spoon Spurs on the arsenic solvent ~ just right ~ unaffected she sips licking her lips She fills up the dropper ~ the mirror shatters ~ The hag’s clinched her fate ~ the mirror darkens ~ The dropper invades The beauteous orb ~ no longer cherry red ~ Innocence lost She grows darker still Wrapping her figure In a stygian cape What does sin smell like? It is subtle like sweet sweat Tucked into body folds Of a seemingly ~ helpless old lady ~ The raven leans upon her crooked cane ~ kindly knocks ~ she hears the whistled tune Of spirited youth Maintains her composure She presents her voice With a charming shake ~ Serpentine ~ Dancing flute-like Into the innocent girl’s eyes The girl thought it strange At the slap of her hand When she attempted to choose The reddest fruit Convincing - this charmer ~ choose this one ~ ~ take a bite ~ Bitterness Tied her tongue Closed her eyes Folded her legs The witch threw her cape Over her head Cackled Thinking herself the most beautiful But the crimson red Of the supposedly dead Would soon be kissed ~ resuscitated ~ By a wandering prince They were all the rage In the day Roaming the wood Looking for damsels ~ In distress ~ The wrinkled face Of the honest mirror ~ repaired ~ A pretty lady holds court “I ask thee mirror, Who is the most beautiful In all the kingdom?” “Dame, your heart is dark” Taps foot ~ impatient ~ “Mirror!” The mirror chuckles “Red lips most kind, Have been revived! Snow White lives Lovely as ever!” Her scream shatters All the palace’s windows Her stomp Sends her Straight to hell ~ And yes for most There is a happily ever after ~ 1/26/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/26/2017 5:00:00 AM
Sweet tale, Kim. Solomon Ochwo Oburu
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Solomon!
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