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Revelry

REVELRY Our settlements these days identify With blooming darkness Velvety petals have turned Into prickly thorns Patches of blood adore pathways As on a canvas, random brushes Of seasoned painters do Invisibility has helped cover Umbilical cord that nourishes Flourishing bazaars Which, by the way, claim To be self-styled pillar Of our vibrant democracy ‘Whether you do, don’t or the way vote Has no inkling with Your doomed prosperity’ they say, ‘Your voluptuous appetite for smoke, Not whims of bazaar Has rendered mill-chimneys crestfallen’ You can die of hunger, sorry! But you won’t ever be deprived Of revelry, Our settlements guarantee these days!

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Date: 6/24/2016 6:06:00 AM
How beautiful and eloquent expression " blooming darkness " ... a poem of reality we are surrounded by ... very well written ...
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Sourabh Singh
Date: 7/1/2016 1:54:00 AM
It highly elates me when I chance to see such complementary words for my poem. Thank you Mr. Probir Gupta.
Date: 6/23/2016 9:07:00 PM
Sourabh Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sourabh Singh
Date: 7/1/2016 1:57:00 AM
When a poetess like you writes something that is always more than encouraging dear. I invite you to give critical comments on my poetry so that I shall have a chance to improve myself. Thank you so much dear for your love!
Date: 6/23/2016 3:21:00 PM
Welcome aboard, Sourabh.....skat
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Sourabh Singh
Date: 7/1/2016 1:59:00 AM
It's my sheer pleasure dear skat A.

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