Revelry

REVELRY

Our settlements these days identify
With blooming darkness
Velvety petals have turned
Into prickly thorns
Patches of blood adore pathways
As on a canvas, random brushes
Of seasoned painters do
Invisibility has helped cover
Umbilical cord that nourishes
Flourishing bazaars
Which, by the way, claim
To be self-styled pillar
Of our vibrant democracy
‘Whether you do, don’t or the way vote
Has no inkling with 
Your doomed prosperity’ they say,
‘Your voluptuous appetite for smoke,
Not whims of bazaar
Has rendered mill-chimneys crestfallen’
You can die of hunger, sorry!
But you won’t ever be deprived
Of revelry,
Our settlements guarantee these days!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:06 AM
How beautiful and eloquent expression " blooming darkness " ... a poem of reality we are surrounded by ... very well written ...
Singh Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:54 AM
It highly elates me when I chance to see such complementary words for my poem. Thank you Mr. Probir Gupta.
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June 23, 2016 at 9:07 PM
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Singh Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:57 AM
When a poetess like you writes something that is always more than encouraging dear. I invite you to give critical comments on my poetry so that I shall have a chance to improve myself. Thank you so much dear for your love!
A  Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Welcome aboard, Sourabh.....skat
Singh Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:59 AM
It's my sheer pleasure dear skat A.
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