Nataliq Georgieva Poet I do not know?

Revelation

Like a rose by autumn broken,
      losing charm of wound in the frost,
      so with a tear in me 
      your heart -my heart hurts.
      And I'm not care not color nor bird,
      no feel sorry for this tiny drass,
      in each image and star I found
      see a shadow of your trail not once,
      captured by the visual fraud,
      fly like free butterfly in your sections 
      and search and call, but you're not
      your are not a bird nor a blade,you are
      just a piece of my heart and breath....


     
                                   
                                                   /"REVELATION" -Natalia Georgieva/

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Nataliq Georgieva January 19, 2011 at 10:14 AM Tanks for the repy mr.Freemen! It is an honor... But is not is beter as an idea,these honorable place to be evidenced by documents... Sincerely N.Georgieva

John Freeman January 19, 2011 at 9:01 AM I place you as an honorable mention, Georgieva. Thanks for honoring my Contest with your entry. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2011 at 4:15 PM Very descriptive and expressive work..Congrats..Sara

Eiken Laan January 17, 2011 at 2:10 PM Congratulations on this beautiful piece of writing:)))

Sharon Ruebel January 17, 2011 at 11:24 AM Hello Natalig, This is so beautiful, what precious words you have penned here. Congratulations for this lovely Poem. As Always, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 8:51 AM Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Nataliq sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick January 16, 2011 at 7:27 PM Hey Nataliq! Congratulations on your Honorable Mention Placement in John's contest! Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 16, 2011 at 6:06 PM Congrats Natalig on your fantastic HM in John's contest with this fabulous entry ... enjoy your special honor tonight with luv..

John Freeman January 16, 2011 at 3:56 PM I loved your revelation, Nataliq. Congratulations on your success in my contest. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta January 16, 2011 at 3:17 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win inn the contest, Nataliq

Robert Pettit January 16, 2011 at 3:03 PM A good ensemble of words in this composition.

John Rhinem January 8, 2011 at 9:23 AM Smile ~ First I wish to sincerely say that, "I Love 'Your Beautiful Name' My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless, Natalia Georgieva!!!'" ~ Second, upon the rereading of this extremely soulful painting of "A Beautiful Canvas" I can say, not only is it very movingly lovely but, "Keep Brushing, From That Trove of 'Your Beautiful Soul!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day & New Year, My Dear;" Bye!:) ~