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The Occult is very much alive though secret where neighbors wear robes in ceremonies like their important while summoning memories and scripture of ancient pyramids, guidestones and stonehenges though it is their darkest secrets that cannot last through time of manipulating targeted ones ETERNITY through an alchemist's needle 28-September-2021 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 16 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write/shape and picture. Have a blessed day.............
Agustin Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:15 PM
Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing this dramatic monologue of yours earnestly expressed in your excellent poetic style. Indeed, thanks for your participation. God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 3:13 PM
This is very true, Robert. Insightful poem and I like how the form goes with the topic of pyramid. Great example
La France Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Robert, wonderful and I like the shape created, harder than it looks to do, well done and a great example for your contest, hope I can write you a beauty ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Reilly Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 11:43 AM
The needle I used to craft your shoes , the needle I used to sew your wounds , the needle I used to bore the holes through your preciuos bones...are the scriptures of love and the harvest of times of celebrations, good food and a jug of fine wine are written within the stones.and I met my lover by the stones many moons ago
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Well done and with shape!
Poet Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 5:04 AM
I enjoyed reading this very well-crafted poem, Robert. My best wishes for the contest.
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