Joyce Johnson Poet Limerick

Revealing Truth

She didn't look me in the eyes
As she said "I'll find a larger size".
It soon was very plain to see
This bikini was not meant for me.
It resembled one of Daddy's ties.



For Battle of Bulge contest won 2nd place in Battle of the Bulge contest

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Daniel Cwiak May 27, 2010 at 10:46 AM Gongrats on your win in the contest. It hits the nail on the head. Dan C

John Freeman May 26, 2010 at 5:07 PM Congratulations on your 2nt place Joyce. a worthy presentation for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Sharon Tideswell May 26, 2010 at 5:00 PM Enjoyed your limerick, congratulations on achieving 2nd place.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 26, 2010 at 12:28 PM Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Bulge contest with this great Limerick.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sean Kelly May 26, 2010 at 11:04 AM It depends where the knot is , Joyce and well done with a very clever piece . PS That wasn't a bow-tie ????

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2010 at 9:30 AM Got a great laugh thinking of you wearing one of your father's ties, Joyce, as well as the "attitude" of the sales lady. Congratulations on placing second in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Amy Green May 23, 2010 at 9:59 AM OOOoh, slap in the face! Good one.

James Marshall Goff May 22, 2010 at 4:14 PM very funny! Joyce! jimbo

Francine Roberts May 22, 2010 at 2:44 PM Good one Joyce, good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2010 at 1:36 PM smiles to you Joyce, enjoyed, and goodd luck,..p..d

Skat A May 22, 2010 at 1:21 PM WOW,HARD HITTING TRUTH, AND FUNNY LOL, GOOD LUCK ON THE CONTEST

Michael J. Falotico May 22, 2010 at 12:56 PM lol very good write Joyce...