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Revealing Truth

She didn't look me in the eyes As she said "I'll find a larger size". It soon was very plain to see This bikini was not meant for me. It resembled one of Daddy's ties. For Battle of Bulge contest won 2nd place in Battle of the Bulge contest

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/27/2010 10:46:00 AM

Gongrats on your win in the contest. It hits the nail on the head. Dan C

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2010 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nt place Joyce. a worthy presentation for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 5/26/2010 5:00:00 PM

Enjoyed your limerick, congratulations on achieving 2nd place.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 12:28:00 PM

Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Bulge contest with this great Limerick.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/26/2010 11:04:00 AM

It depends where the knot is , Joyce and well done with a very clever piece . PS That wasn't a bow-tie ????

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2010 9:30:00 AM

Got a great laugh thinking of you wearing one of your father's ties, Joyce, as well as the "attitude" of the sales lady. Congratulations on placing second in the contest! Love, Carolyn