Edward Ibeh Poet Rictameter

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Reveal

reveal 
what lies beneath 
veneer of "all is fine."
draw your veil back so I can see 
the pain hiding behind those smiling eyes. 
please, magnificent enigma,
excavate your demons;
be courageous,
reveal.


"R" Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme chosen: Reveal
Date written: 10/06/2021

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Jan Allison October 7, 2021 at 3:45 PM excellent ink Edward I dont think I've written this form before, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Edward Ibeh October 8, 2021 at 3:50 PM Thank you so much, Jan:-)

Christuraj Alex October 7, 2021 at 9:55 AM This is a very beautiful poem in Rictametr form in which you are an expert. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh October 7, 2021 at 1:55 PM Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

Constance La France October 7, 2021 at 8:11 AM Edward, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Edward Ibeh October 7, 2021 at 1:54 PM Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.

Heidi Sands October 7, 2021 at 6:46 AM Great one Edward :) Edward Ibeh October 7, 2021 at 1:53 PM Thank you, Heidi:-)

Kim Rodrigues October 6, 2021 at 7:46 PM Nicely done, Edward! Edward Ibeh October 6, 2021 at 11:03 PM Thank you, Kim:-)