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reveal what lies beneath veneer of "all is fine." draw your veil back so I can see the pain hiding behind those smiling eyes. please, magnificent enigma, excavate your demons; be courageous, reveal. "R" Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme chosen: Reveal Date written: 10/06/2021

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Date: 10/7/2021 3:45:00 PM
excellent ink Edward I dont think I've written this form before, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/8/2021 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan:-)
Date: 10/7/2021 9:55:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem in Rictametr form in which you are an expert. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 10/7/2021 8:11:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 10/7/2021 6:46:00 AM
Great one Edward :)
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Date: 10/7/2021 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi:-)
Date: 10/6/2021 7:46:00 PM
Nicely done, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/6/2021 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)

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