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Reunion

“Years have passed since that day under the fig tree. Our promises were countess. Your eyes had shone and my voice was thick. You stood on your toes and bit my nose, sticking your tongue out in a challenge. I'd accepted and pulled you so close that it brought intoxicated clarity. And then you were gone. Next morning a letter waited on my table, your words asking forgiveness. Life has moved on, grey hair, mortgage, two sons. But Subhamita, how could I forget You?”
-------------------------------------- Form: Double Etheree Date: 08 / 11 / 2016 Contest: Unrequited Love Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 12/25/2016 6:13:00 AM
Very expressive and could relate to the 'bengaliness' of it all...great read
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/25/2016 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Iman!
Date: 12/1/2016 12:26:00 AM
Very well written ... Emotions expressed in a lovely manner ... a nice read ...
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 12/1/2016 2:03:00 AM
Thank you, sir!
Date: 11/30/2016 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations Tamal in the placement of the contest.
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 11/30/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda, and thank you for the contest!

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