Returning (Englyn)

Cold engulfed her flesh when she lastly reached
this old house forsaken;
lilac scent has awakened
at yesterday's ghost's haven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 29, 2008 at 11:59 AM
Interesting use of this challenging form. Much to think about in your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 29, 2008 at 6:36 AM
Lilacs are memories of my mom. Great job with this form of poetry. Love, Shar
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September 28, 2008 at 8:58 PM
Nice imagery and you invoked the smell and fright at the same time...
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