Return of Emerald Dream

The summer sun sucked the simmering sky desert dry,
clumps of grey cloud spawned by the moist horizon,
torn in thwarted winds of failed storm they tried to fly. 
The clusters desiccated except for a pained lone one.

In the course of scorched and sad sail it could save
for the aborted summer storm a swelling tear drop.
The squall decimated and seared in the heat wave,
the molten grief dripped morphing into a raindrop.

At the edge of the wasteland a solitary tree grieved,
the parched foliage drooped, rains didn’t hear its call.
Still holding hope on the slim stem an upright leave
found on its wilted and sapless face a raindrop fall.

In the summer sky the adrift and saddened lone cloud
didn’t whimper as under the sun it felt its future burn 
for quenching the thirst of a dying leaf it was proud.
Waned life saw in tear raindrop emerald dream return.

November 18, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 1:23 AM
This is very lovely Subimal! You are talented at expressing emotions of nature as well as human emotions leaving us with a concrete feeling of being connected to all that surrounds us. BEAUTIFUL! Congratulations on your second placement my friend! I am FAVING this gem! xxoo ; )
Carmack Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Congrats with this one.
Dutta Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:09 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top.
Cornish Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 11:43 AM
So artfully portrayed Subimal, I was surprised when I posted the winners and saw you had no comments and glad that has deservedly changed - you get better all the time
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:42 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "The Raindrop" contest poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 12:03 AM
What a rich tapestry of images you use in your poem, Subimal! Congrats on your win!
Mitra Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Wow..as usual with your rich words..this creation is a poetic tribute
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Wow - love the emotion in your poem, Subimal. Congrats on your most deserved top win.
Roper Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Nicely done, Subimal, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
Messina Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful poetry, Subimal..Congrats on your top win...Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Superb write, Subimal!:-) No wonder it placed very high! Congrats on capturing 2nd place spot!
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