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Return of Emerald Dream

The summer sun sucked the simmering sky desert dry, clumps of grey cloud spawned by the moist horizon, torn in thwarted winds of failed storm they tried to fly. The clusters desiccated except for a pained lone one. In the course of scorched and sad sail it could save for the aborted summer storm a swelling tear drop. The squall decimated and seared in the heat wave, the molten grief dripped morphing into a raindrop. At the edge of the wasteland a solitary tree grieved, the parched foliage drooped, rains didn’t hear its call. Still holding hope on the slim stem an upright leave found on its wilted and sapless face a raindrop fall. In the summer sky the adrift and saddened lone cloud didn’t whimper as under the sun it felt its future burn for quenching the thirst of a dying leaf it was proud. Waned life saw in tear raindrop emerald dream return. November 18, 2018

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Date: 12/2/2018 1:23:00 AM
This is very lovely Subimal! You are talented at expressing emotions of nature as well as human emotions leaving us with a concrete feeling of being connected to all that surrounds us. BEAUTIFUL! Congratulations on your second placement my friend! I am FAVING this gem! xxoo ; )
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:04:00 PM
Congrats with this one.
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Date: 11/26/2018 11:09:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win top.
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Date: 11/26/2018 11:43:00 AM
So artfully portrayed Subimal, I was surprised when I posted the winners and saw you had no comments and glad that has deservedly changed - you get better all the time
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "The Raindrop" contest poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:03:00 AM
What a rich tapestry of images you use in your poem, Subimal! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/25/2018 9:24:00 PM
Wow..as usual with your rich words..this creation is a poetic tribute
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Date: 11/25/2018 7:31:00 PM
Wow - love the emotion in your poem, Subimal. Congrats on your most deserved top win.
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:48:00 PM
Nicely done, Subimal, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:45:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Subimal..Congrats on your top win...Charlie
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:41:00 PM
Superb write, Subimal!:-) No wonder it placed very high! Congrats on capturing 2nd place spot!
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