Retro-Retired Wheels

Got yourself some new wheels, huh?
I can hear the squeals of rubber burning
I cough exhaust…left behind, oh gosh! I’m holding just a pile of dented fenders…
suspended… Your bucks spent. Engine Red..that foreign bred truck! 
Snap, crackle and Popular Mechanic…Look at the maniac go….! 
Holy, Moly….must be rolling in dough! 
Woe is me, a junk yard dog, pile of junk, smelly sneakers left in my trunk
There he goes….who knows where….how many horses…under that hood...? 
Should I know?  I’d fly too, if I could. Just scrap metal in my bellow.
Heavy pedal, limp and wasted..used to be his favorite girl…kept me polished, waxed 
and oiled…now I’m soiled. No garage..no umbrella, who gives a rip?  Worn out 
engine, give up the ship!   Cast away…..not in style…gave a ride to Gomer Pyle
 “See the USA in your Chevrolet"…, ‘cept that I ain’t got no carburetor
See ya later gator…what’s the hurry fella? Did ya see the light was yellow?
Red light, yellow light…. see if we can make the green
Going green….going green,….does that mean his hybrid’s clean?
Anti-freeze, it makes me sneeze….can’t I have some oil please?
Give ‘er the gas, let’s see what she’s got! 
OH.. forgot!…ain’t got my tires..I’m retired
Pubescent male migration, arcing over sunless streets
Hear that squeak……doctor told me oil leak
Honest Engine, joined the pack, no Pontiac to take that ride
Is there heaven for old cars?  Car 54 where are you?? 
I got my kicks on Route 66, running relays, no baton, just open freeways
Son of a gun…give it the gun……vroom.. vroom… run… run!
One door closes, need new hoses, or I don’t go nowhere… no how
Pile of rust, I’ve been busted, up on blocks…what a crock! 
My teeth and pride are all knocked in…windshield wipers brush a tear
Windshield wipers swipe the years…skid marks show behind my eyes
Teeth and pride are all knocked in, guess I’m just an old has been!



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a stream of consciousness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/29/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:14:00 AM
Many congrats Carrie for big win in Debbies contest with this road trip fantasy at its best. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:31:00 AM
Another win for you today, Carrie! Congratulations, dear. This is awesome. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:27:00 AM
Many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:46:00 AM
a sheer delight to travel with you, carrie.. what a wheezy road trip! special applause for the glowing win..:) huggs
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Date: 4/24/2011 2:22:00 AM
San Bern, down to Missouri, Oklahoma City is Oh So pretty! If you get the chance to motor West, Take the Highway that's the Best...Get Your KICKs on Route 66! Great poem which reminds us of a great song about a great road! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/22/2011 3:32:00 PM
Wildly funny description with hints of "road rage," Carrie! Deb is sure to love this awesome stream of consciousness. Yes, I did try to go brunette the day before my wedding and it looked green. Yuck! Won't try that again soon. Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:39:00 AM
Lol... I enjoyed your poem... and the way you use snap, crackle and...popular mechanic... Ooo and the route 66 line kicks butts ... great one Carrie,.. take care... p.d.
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:31:00 AM
Nicely written and imaginative.
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