Retort

His wife called him a good for nothing rat
         As in his armchair old Jim sat,
    Jim retorted with a very broad grin,
 You know you will never get a double chin,
Because all that exercise is bound to kill fat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 30, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Yewww... Yeow... That Dear Jim was a mean old fart!... Known a few like him... LOL
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