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Resuscitation

"Police claimed that because most of the body had been skeletonized, no resuscitation attempt was performed." Quoted from an article on the internet.


They said from the clothes he wore that he was a male

Really in the year 2022, one cannot tell from a person's dress

Nor what might happen if you pronounce a sex

Coroner look closely again at skeleton left


The body was found by someone doing a YouTube report

He was going around exploring and filming abandoned building

He had to climb a ladder to enter this building that had been a church, but

All boarded up for so long, therefore entrance on the first floor to the church~ 

Impossible


The second floor was living quarters where the deceased was discovered

It had been ten years plus since the church was an active, ongoing fellowship

So much can happen in ten years plus

A live human being can become skeletonized


I wonder who he was, did his family want to learn what had happened

Were they missing him and desiring his return

Will they ever learn the fate of their loved one who had gone missing

Is there enough material to do a DNA sample?


Did his loved one's life go on just like before or

Has their life been suspended in time waiting

Waiting, waiting, waiting, watching, waiting, longing, crying or 

Glad that the person has gone on somewhere else


Matthew 25: 13. Therefore, be on the alert [be prepared and ready], for you do not know the day nor the hour [when the Son of Man will come]. Amplified Bible ( This does not refer to our time of death, but it made me think about how we don't know.)

Date Written: 8/23/2022
Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 13
Sponsor: Mark Toney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 9/2/2022 9:26:00 AM
Very engaging poetry, Sara.... ! Even after all these years, there is still intrigue! It seems a little bit unusual that DNA testing can be done. Considering that the structure had been deserted for a considerable amount of time. I want to thank you for the kind and supportive words that you left on my page.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2022 11:39:00 AM
Your presence at my page always is uplifting. I am wondering if they can do some DNA testing. I hope so. They gave a description of what he was wearing and partial tattoos descriptions and pictures of rings he was wearing that could help a family member maybe identify him . Sara
Date: 8/24/2022 9:44:00 AM
If a person dies without being identified, it will give room for a number of assumptions and presumptions ! The identity of the person, the reason for his death and the response of his dear ones, all will remain yet another mystery ! A very intriguing poem, Sara.... ! The suspense remains even after years !
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/24/2022 1:17:00 PM
Valsa, in the article they described what he was wearing and what could be made out of some of his tattoos, rings he was wearing and that he was African American. I suppose that information would be enough for some family to know or suspicion that he could be their family member who is missing and then maybe a DNA test could be done. Someone said to the police that the building had been closed up for 15 years. The investigators said it did not seem he die from foul play. Thanks for the visit and leaving such a nice comment. Sara
Date: 8/23/2022 10:47:00 AM
A "You tub" Report? What dry humour! Aloha!
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Date: 8/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
Rico, I totally missed my typo. LOL..Yes, dry humor for sure. Sara
Date: 8/23/2022 7:06:00 AM
Wow! That is a crazy one! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 8/23/2022 7:16:00 AM
Kim, I feel a little crazy this morning. LOL..Sara
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