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Resuscitation

the death inside of me tried to become alive my jaws of life screamed not to let it free tranquil from another pill bartender what's a good mix with this martini well stirred preferred but i'm sure you'll be shaken once again when the olive's skin be gins to release the gin from underneath the second time around i'd like a third

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Jackie Elston

Date: 3/10/2020 10:36:00 AM

yep..the Kuala bears 'know' the secret alright ..but..l think the 3 toed night & day fruit eating Sloth beat them & their 2 toed brothers to it..nowww l know why they hang on for dear life upside down fr branches & took 10 hrs to climb up there..bit like me really, on a Saturday night lol lol Jx p

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/10/2020 10:45:00 AM

Lol too funny. Thanks Jackie.

Jackie Elston

Date: 3/9/2020 11:01:00 AM

l often wondered who invented alcohol then found out lots of wild life love to drink on fermented fruit in water as they like the way it makes them feel. How do they 'know' how they feel l wonder ? l like 2 rum & cokes as my night cap but 3 ,i'm flying with the birds, not recommended lol.J x

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/9/2020 4:35:00 PM

Lol Jackie. Thank you for your comment. Next time you pass a field of cows eating along the fence line, look into their eyes lol. Also, the obvious: Kuala bears. They are hooked on eucalyptus... just eucalyptus. They are stoned little wankers lol.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2020 9:00:00 AM

You have a way with words. ;0)

Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/9/2020 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Richard. I'm not trying to be a snake oil medicine cure all salesman; but I hope my poetry is okay???

Alkas Poetry

Date: 3/9/2020 5:27:00 AM

I USED TO DIE WHEN VODKA CONSUMED ME ... DIED SEVERAL TIMES, BUT TIME WAS BRINGING ME BACK ... NOW I ONLY TAKE BEER AND NEVER DIE MORE ...GOOD DREAMS AND DRINKS MY FRIEND... SO WELL WRITTEN, SALUTE ALKAS