Notes About The Poem

Resuscitated Memories

Fall cold rainy days
Crisp wet leaves 
Twirling and waltzing
Flying and floating
 
Riding October desolate gusts
Retro tunes that resuscitate
Memories of young love
Echoes of how I love you

Deep in the heart
Awakened by the sound of
Walking through wet fallen leaves
Ever so close as one

Holding on tight
Isolated in a cold sullen world
Warm enraptured hearts
Under a shared umbrella

Alone together
Along a silent canal
Riddled by a multitude of raindrops
Anxious to seek shelter

Ever so content
Creating memories         



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on April 1, 2018 for contest LOVE POEM sponsored by HEIDI SANDS  -  RANKED 4TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations, line on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love.
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 5:40 AM
Thank you, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and message.
Sands Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Line. Congratulations for your win! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Much appreciated contest and ranking.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Although you did not know this on a conscious level, this is now my poem, Line. I claim it for my FAV list. All of the really great loves and marriages seem to happen in the fall. My anniversary is October 10th, 1971, so in your honor and with positive regard an love, can I please keep this poem forever?
Gauthier Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:13 PM
With pleasure, it's yours, Caren. Line xx
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