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Resurrection

(Chorus) You think you've got swagger but really you hobble, you've got the jet lagger and you're drunk so you wobble, don't start on me mate 'cus I will bring trouble, to put it into slang words I'm Barney Rubble. (Verse) I will ruffle trouble 'cus I'm on another level that bombs with the base and stings with the treble, I'll strut face to face with any ace rebel, and put them in their place with their constant bull. When I rhyme with my contortionist wrist it expels a mist that sits around my fist, I spell magic out on paper, I'm playing with danger, Mr. Wizardry the word selectionist, squiggling fiction at speeds that feed friction into rhymes that are non stop hot and cool, so flames don't flame on the table top, journey with me to witness the plot, the earth shaker creator of perfected hip hop, starting revolutions so that mumble is forgot, dislodging the rust and rot it coughs that clots and instating my Barney Rubble at the top. (Chorus x2) (Verse) That last verse was just a small handful, a sample of something that you cannot handle, a scan like a bar code, so lets open up the road and I'll unload these words, I can't conceal this skill that rolls like wheels, a Rolls Royce wearing heels, in fancy halls doing dancing drills, with golden walls to an old skool beat treat. I wont get signed up by any record label, but I'm still rhyming better than mumble's able, just admit you're tapping your feet to the beat while my rhyme sits on top solid like concrete, with the dancefloor crammed full, they're pulling at all angles, making the memories that'll last 'til they're O A P's, they think they've got swagger and they're like Mick Jagger, they're more like Sepp Blatter but a little bit fatter. (Chorus x2) (Verse) You can call me Trimendous and true, you thought I'd flew crashed and was screwed, but I took it back to what inspired my act, an old skool hip hop sick rhyme attack, I rhymed in flight with this write and its smile's wild with sublime delight, there are no poetic rare words and I don't need swear words in this dictionary spared verse with airstream rhythm you can't burst, I'm wearing this deserved set of words that pilots and surges to my re-emergence, a certainty that was never urgent and not an encore from behind the curtains. (Chorus x2)

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Date: 12/12/2018 3:36:00 PM
fab lyrics Nick, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nick Trim
Date: 12/13/2018 7:46:00 AM
thanks Jan, it makes a good song, I just need to find someone that can rap...….. cus I defo cannot lol, thanks again
Date: 12/12/2018 5:45:00 AM
Nick, your entry far exceed the 12 to 20 lines suggested in the contest description. I'm sure it took you quite a long time to write. Congratulations on your placement. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Nick Trim
Date: 12/12/2018 7:20:00 AM
ahh but you said you'd prefer 12-20 lines not that it was a rule lol :), technicality lol thanks for the placement and for doing the comp, :)
Date: 9/18/2018 6:00:00 PM
Hello Nick Trim, owo! I enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Nick Trim
Date: 9/22/2018 8:16:00 PM
thanks Darlene
Date: 9/11/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nick. Well done.
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Nick Trim
Date: 9/13/2018 8:05:00 AM
thanks Line :)
Date: 9/11/2018 8:15:00 PM
I'm not going to lie; I was really hoping to catch an mp3 of this here. This style poetry doesn't get the spotlight often (at least not recently since I've been here). I think part of the reason is the varied rhythms really require the percussion cues to keep the reader at the right timing. Regardless though, this was a fun and entertaining read. Congrats on your top 10 finish.
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Date: 9/13/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks for doing the competition and for the placement, there is a video of the song on youtube here is the link to copy and paste (it's not the best recording but it'll do lol) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MfnKjzd57Eo&t=0s&index=4&list=PLrWXQQOwWgeAzG8lMiXPHNQeO_aFFxhLi