Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Restless

Yesterday mother nature was restless, strong winds blew
Kind of like my restless heart, sitting alone, waiting for you
Overnight's dreams calmed me like a soft blown breeze
Today is settled and quiet, with beams of sun on snow through the trees
I am not one to know the timing of greetings or goodbyes
On these rolling hills through life, with silent, distant, cries
For this, for that, for all that ensues,
After those restless moments when we are gifted to choose

Heidi Sands

3/1/24

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Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen March 4, 2024 at 6:18 AM Lovely write I enjoyed reading your work. Heidi Sands March 4, 2024 at 6:26 AM Thank you Volanda. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Valsa George March 1, 2024 at 10:11 PM You have powerfully equated nature's restlessness with your own. Hope, it won't last long. May peace and quiet descend down to you. A beautifully rhyming poem, dear Heidi! Heidi Sands March 2, 2024 at 5:30 AM Thank you very much Valsa :)

Sotto Poet March 1, 2024 at 7:46 AM Heidi, your poem eloquently illustrates the intricate dance of emotions intertwined with the natural world's rhythmic patterns. The imagery you've crafted is truly exceptional. Heidi Sands March 1, 2024 at 8:25 AM Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your kind feedback on this. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit March 1, 2024 at 6:04 AM So wonderfully expressive poem my friend. You captured the beauty of nature even when it is restless.---I am not one to know the timing of greetings or goodbyes On these rolling hills through life, with silent, distant, cries--so well done, Heidi. A FAVE! Heidi Sands March 1, 2024 at 6:42 AM Thank you so very much my friend. Nature sure was restless with that strong wind yesterday. I appreciate your comment and support , with the Fave too. You make days special :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 1, 2024 at 5:41 AM Dear Heidi, your poem beautifully captures the ebb and flow of emotions intertwined with the rhythm of nature. Wonderful imagery of strong winds and settled quietness mirrors the fluctuations of the heart, waiting and yearning. A poignant sense of longing and reflection shows us the restless journey through life's ups and downs. A heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel Heidi Sands March 1, 2024 at 5:51 AM Thank you Daniel. It is nice to hear your feedback. I appreciate your input :)