Restless

Yesterday mother nature was restless, strong winds blew Kind of like my restless heart, sitting alone, waiting for you Overnight's dreams calmed me like a soft blown breeze Today is settled and quiet, with beams of sun on snow through the trees I am not one to know the timing of greetings or goodbyes On these rolling hills through life, with silent, distant, cries For this, for that, for all that ensues, After those restless moments when we are gifted to choose Heidi Sands 3/1/24 (C)opyright

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/4/2024 6:18:00 AM

Lovely write I enjoyed reading your work.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/4/2024 6:26:00 AM

Thank you Volanda. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Valsa George

Date: 3/1/2024 10:11:00 PM

You have powerfully equated nature's restlessness with your own. Hope, it won't last long. May peace and quiet descend down to you. A beautifully rhyming poem, dear Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/2/2024 5:30:00 AM

Thank you very much Valsa :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 3:50:00 PM

you captured the beauty of nature even when it's restless, reminding me that I should do the same with people who are restless, etc., --look for the beauty beyond. Nicely done! enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 3:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara. Happy evening! Enjoy. Hugs :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/1/2024 7:46:00 AM

Heidi, your poem eloquently illustrates the intricate dance of emotions intertwined with the natural world's rhythmic patterns. The imagery you've crafted is truly exceptional.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 8:25:00 AM

Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your kind feedback on this. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2024 6:04:00 AM

So wonderfully expressive poem my friend. You captured the beauty of nature even when it is restless.---I am not one to know the timing of greetings or goodbyes On these rolling hills through life, with silent, distant, cries--so well done, Heidi. A FAVE!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 6:42:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. Nature sure was restless with that strong wind yesterday. I appreciate your comment and support , with the Fave too. You make days special :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/1/2024 5:41:00 AM

Dear Heidi, your poem beautifully captures the ebb and flow of emotions intertwined with the rhythm of nature. Wonderful imagery of strong winds and settled quietness mirrors the fluctuations of the heart, waiting and yearning. A poignant sense of longing and reflection shows us the restless journey through life's ups and downs. A heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Daniel. It is nice to hear your feedback. I appreciate your input :)

Tom Woody

Date: 3/1/2024 5:30:00 AM

Reflective poetry Heidi. Hope all is well. I know you've had some challenges

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 5:50:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Yes, true. I hope all is well :)