Resting With Stars

Resting on a garden of stars
loud metro hours pause,
till I find my center
soothing tired breath
along winks of night’s orchard.




30 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pinet Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 10:52 AM
You did a wonderful job here, I read it several times and it came alive for me. Emile. #7
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:44 AM
very unique imagery. congrats on the win.
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January 14, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Leon, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:09 AM
Congrats on win Leon...Rajat
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 10:59 PM
Sounds like a tranquil, meditative somewhere...just lovely! Congrats to you, Leon!! Hugs, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Congrats on the win with this nicely worded visual, Leon
Nance Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 5:39 PM
along winks of night's orchard-wonderful line! I love it, grats on your win!
Allison Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 2:42 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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