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Resting With Stars

Resting on a garden of stars loud metro hours pause, till I find my center soothing tired breath along winks of night’s orchard. Leon Datu for SOMEWHERE contest Hosted by nette onclaud -- 10th Jan 2015 30 syllables

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Date: 3/3/2015 10:52:00 AM
You did a wonderful job here, I read it several times and it came alive for me. Emile. #7
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Date: 1/16/2015 11:27:00 AM
Leon.. This is great, congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:44:00 AM
very unique imagery. congrats on the win.
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:29:00 PM
Leon, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on win Leon...Rajat
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Date: 1/13/2015 10:59:00 PM
Sounds like a tranquil, meditative somewhere...just lovely! Congrats to you, Leon!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on the win with this nicely worded visual, Leon
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:39:00 PM
along winks of night's orchard-wonderful line! I love it, grats on your win!
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:42:00 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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