Resting With Stars

Resting on a garden of stars loud metro hours pause, till I find my center soothing tired breath along winks of night’s orchard. Leon Datu for SOMEWHERE contest Hosted by nette onclaud -- 10th Jan 2015 30 syllables

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Emile Pinet

Date: 3/3/2015 10:52:00 AM

You did a wonderful job here, I read it several times and it came alive for me. Emile. #7

The LYRIC

Date: 1/16/2015 11:27:00 AM

Leon.. This is great, congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2015 12:44:00 AM

very unique imagery. congrats on the win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:29:00 PM

Leon, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY

Date: 1/14/2015 10:09:00 AM

Congrats on win Leon...Rajat

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/13/2015 10:59:00 PM

Sounds like a tranquil, meditative somewhere...just lovely! Congrats to you, Leon!! Hugs, Rhonda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2015 9:38:00 PM

Congrats on the win with this nicely worded visual, Leon

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 5:39:00 PM

along winks of night's orchard-wonderful line! I love it, grats on your win!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 1/13/2015 2:42:00 PM

wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x