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Resting in peace

much can be said about Black Flag and Raid the devious poisons that for bugs are made in obvious places the concoctions are sprayed leaving the residue that i think bugs crave they creep around tasting the ground dust laced with poison they lick their claws unaware of the laws kept crawling giving not the slighest pause to the dizziness the crave has caused no running no hidding but quite surprizing the cage growing inside a few more steps not many left deep sleep furiously calling on the back and under attach bug has bugs inside legs twitching maybe itching from sickness it decllnes and i wonder as it slumbers is it hurt or is it high not far from wall where poison did fall this unwelcome creature will die what can we say about the sprays that keep us safe from harm always working secretly lurking constantly on guard when they kiss they never miss its love for eternity. lye back and rest its for the best from Rest In Peace security furiously calling

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Date: 10/26/2013 7:28:00 PM
Thank heavens for pesticides. I can't stand crawling and flying stuff. Nice rhythmic flow you've managed here. Well done. By the by, your writing style is very much like a friend of mine's, 1 of 3. Licia :-)
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:06:00 AM
Way to go...The question is what does it do to humans?...I am glad that we have it though..If we didn't have it each home would have to have a few geckos to take care of the roach population..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:28:00 PM
Bugs bus bugs if I had them all in jugs I'd dig dig dig a big big hole and that would be the end of bugs. Most entertaining situation.
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Date: 7/22/2013 11:17:00 PM
Nasty and effective
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Date: 7/22/2013 10:17:00 AM
I'm diggin' this. The perspective here was a bit unique. Plus, I can't stand bugs anyways. Natural selection! lol
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Date: 7/19/2013 11:58:00 AM
i think i'm going to make a few of these unique poems with the theme hunting things we don't like.
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