Get Your Premium Membership

Resting

In deep repose she lays there Why so still, not a movement made Newly brushed and fanned out hair What could trouble such a maid If the bullies could see her All relaxed and fast asleep Not scared of her own shadow Or the abusers that make her weep Doesn’t talk about this happening Keeps it deeply hidden within. That’s why she needed help resting Before the churning inside begins. She chose hypnosis to help her Thoughts deep inside must show Buried deeply it’s not healthy Clear the fears they have to go When awoken she was stronger Mind set, no longer being afraid Will stand up to her aggressors No more the frightened maid May 14th 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/9/2014 8:03:00 AM
LOL... :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2014 7:37:00 PM
Hey It's okay to fall asleep on the soup... I knew you meant thank you... your so kind...Linda
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2014 10:47:00 PM
Do it all the time Linda....lol ....Seren
Date: 6/8/2014 2:17:00 PM
lol,, again, thanks for the reply
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 6/8/2014 3:25:00 PM
I think I fell asleep answering you lol. Many thx for your congrats ...Seren
Date: 5/31/2014 8:09:00 AM
you are welcome..PD
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/31/2014 12:31:00 PM
Ty
Date: 5/30/2014 11:57:00 PM
nice win, Seren,, Love ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/31/2014 3:20:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 5/29/2014 4:52:00 PM
SEREN,, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2014 9:36:00 PM
Thanks Linda.......Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win A unique interpretation of the painting. Hugs, SuZ
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/27/2014 2:19:00 AM
thank you Suzanne....Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 3:11:00 PM
Dear Seren, What a wonderfully unique take on the painting! I like the way her dreams bring her strength to face the "aggressors." How beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/26/2014 4:02:00 PM
Tried to think of a different approach....thanks for commenting ...Seren
Date: 5/26/2014 2:48:00 PM
Yes, we all see different things in dreams, where there's a will there's a way to handle anything!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/26/2014 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Debbie thanks for stopping by ....Seren

Book: Shattered Sighs