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Restful Vision

A foggy mist of a cloud Swirls around the mountain top A pure, soft, sight to be seen In this vision, I stop Then I'm lifted for a moment As light as can be I rest in this vision That floats in front of me A foggy mist of a cloud Carries me along Swirling in the light of sky Where nothing is wrong The mountain is sturdy As my mind drifts, I see There are many peaceful clouds I can ride to be free Heidi Sands 5/4/23

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Date: 5/11/2023 6:51:00 PM
Leave the noise behind, I say. Fly high, Heidi!! Nice penning, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2023 10:19:00 AM
Yes indeed. Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 5/7/2023 12:04:00 PM
Much enjoyed this uplifting poem, Heidi. Nature always inspires great views! Blessings
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2023 3:09:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Yes, the views are very inspiring. Thank you! Blessings :)
Date: 5/7/2023 7:24:00 AM
Heidi, I love the image created that you words - to drift on a cloud! So uplifting to read this is on a Sunday Morn!!! happy Sunday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2023 8:23:00 AM
That is nice to hear. Thank you Mike. Happy Sunday. Xxoo :)
Date: 5/5/2023 5:25:00 AM
A soothing view--much enjoyed the beautiful imagery, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2023 5:27:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this Vijay. Thank you very much. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)
Date: 5/5/2023 12:50:00 AM
- A wonderful vision of beautiful nature, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2023 2:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. Hugs :)
Date: 5/4/2023 5:45:00 PM
Drifting away on blissful clouds, Wonderful write Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2023 2:26:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 5/4/2023 1:53:00 PM
Floating in serenity and loveliness Heidi! I enjoyed the ride with you! Blessings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/4/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Sam. Peace and blessings :)

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