Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Restful Vision

A foggy mist of a cloud
Swirls around the mountain top
A pure, soft, sight to be seen
In this vision, I stop

Then I'm lifted for a moment
As light as can be
I rest in this vision
That floats in front of me

A foggy mist of a cloud
Carries me along
Swirling in the light of sky
Where nothing is wrong

The mountain is sturdy
As my mind drifts, I see
There are many peaceful clouds
I can ride to be free

Heidi Sands

5/4/23

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Gershon Wolf May 11, 2023 at 6:51 PM Leave the noise behind, I say. Fly high, Heidi!! Nice penning, Gershon Heidi Sands May 12, 2023 at 10:19 AM Yes indeed. Thank you Gershon :)

Sotto Poet May 7, 2023 at 12:04 PM Much enjoyed this uplifting poem, Heidi. Nature always inspires great views! Blessings Heidi Sands May 7, 2023 at 3:09 PM I am happy you enjoyed this. Yes, the views are very inspiring. Thank you! Blessings :)

Mike Gentile May 7, 2023 at 7:24 AM Heidi, I love the image created that you words - to drift on a cloud! So uplifting to read this is on a Sunday Morn!!! happy Sunday xxoo Heidi Sands May 7, 2023 at 8:23 AM That is nice to hear. Thank you Mike. Happy Sunday. Xxoo :)

Vijay Pandit May 5, 2023 at 5:25 AM A soothing view--much enjoyed the beautiful imagery, Heidi. Heidi Sands May 5, 2023 at 5:27 AM I am happy you enjoyed this Vijay. Thank you very much. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2023 at 12:50 AM - A wonderful vision of beautiful nature, Heidi :) - hugs Heidi Sands May 5, 2023 at 2:27 AM Thank you very much. Hugs :)

Joseph May May 4, 2023 at 5:45 PM Drifting away on blissful clouds, Wonderful write Heidi Heidi Sands May 5, 2023 at 2:26 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Sam Kauffman May 4, 2023 at 1:53 PM Floating in serenity and loveliness Heidi! I enjoyed the ride with you! Blessings! Heidi Sands May 4, 2023 at 2:19 PM Thank you Sam. Peace and blessings :)