Restaurant Review

A buxom underclad lady loved cooking,
Everytime when no one was looking,
of the sherry she would liberally swig,
then dance a sublime high kicking jig
Now there's always great demand for a booking!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nance Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Haha. entertainment :) I like it. well done.
Laurie Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 11:34 PM
G'day Virginia … your limerick is great for a giggle - thanks - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 12:57 AM
cute one, Virginia. Congrats to you.
Hinshaw Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Virginia, I love great lims and this is a great one! Congrats for your well-deserved win and thx for your kind comment re mine - Bob
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations on your great well written win, Virginia, :) enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Waters Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Thanks Eve-I enjoy this one too.
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
Waters Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:57 AM
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Allison Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 5:46 PM
very witty Virginia I think this would have placed higher if the syllable count had been more accurate especially for lines 3 and 4 which should be 5 - 7 syllables:-) hugs Jan xx
Waters Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:57 AM
not really about winning for me - this is my fav limerick in the older style - so I don't mess with. was too late to change for another but has amused a few - so all good
Cunningham Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Haha at least tell us where it is in case there's a cancellation.
Waters Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 12:54 AM
hehee - well for starters it's Southern Hemisphere
Talbot Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Hear, hear!
Talbot Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Table for two please, loved it!
Waters Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Fully booked til early next year! So sorry
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