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START what where you thinking about did you see me and you had a doubt about the feel of my skin on different parts of your chin that it might irritate your stubble and make your mind and stomach stumble STOP faces apart RESTART So what we're we talking about did you like how I handed back your pride and made that smart mark of yours reside like a child crying that's not mine to dare fish dying when I'm drinking a bottle of water without a care just here watching while trying to dig your fingers in the air STOP hands fall apart RESTART Look down and stay on the ground give it up, I've handed you down I wanted something, but when I look at you now I pretty sure that something, was the thing that made you drown and I'm sorry so sorry that I gave in but hid but the bottle to my pioson has already closed it's lid STOP yeah...you won't remember me anyway RESTART 5 6 7 8 TALK (motivated by team sleep's diamond king)

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Date: 8/11/2010 5:31:00 AM
I enjoyed this write in burlesque form, Jessica
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:13:00 PM
Awesome!!!!!!
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