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Rest Within

Exhausted, I fell into the orbit of you Lonely voyage ... drifting Spent all my fuel searching in the wrong quadrant for the perfect star A trail of cosmic dream debris led me to where you are But I would’ve flew right on by and missed you, had I not emptied my heart I had no more spirit energy, I used it all up looking for the wrong star My heart was just drifting, when I fell into the orbit of you Simply drifting alone, baby Until you pulled me close to you Your love gravity pulled me in so deep Deep into you, baby ... deeper and deeper I would’ve flew right on by and missed you, if my empty heart hadn’t stalled You shone invisible ... shining right in front of me, but I didn’t see You burned invisible ... but your love I couldn’t see Until the force of your love grabbed hold of me, spinning me, spinning me Your attraction wouldn’t let go of me, it was changing me, changing me ... into you, I felt you merging me Your love gravity pulled me into your heart deep Your star shone invisible ... shining right in front of me, but I didn’t see Your star burned invisible ... so glad I fell into your soul healing heat You whispered this glowingly: my love, come rest within the orbit of me This poem was inspired by the talented poet, Tim Smith’s seminal poem, “Vision Quest” — Romantic Warrior

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Date: 10/14/2017 10:16:00 AM
Simply wonderful Freddie. Happy to have inspired such a piece
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Date: 10/14/2017 8:05:00 AM
Susan said it so well, ditto what she said!
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Date: 10/13/2017 8:06:00 PM
Sometimes true love happens when you least expect it Freddie... Such a stellar, romantic poem with vivid imagery. 'Into the orbit of you' - is a beautiful expression of being drawn in and I love that it's repeated, and also your phrase 'Your love gravity' - is deeply evocative. Strong and lush lines of love and poetic bliss. Hugs and love my friend!
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