Rest God's Work

Rip roots from shadow Snip strings from low-hanging clouds Rest God's work today

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Brian Strand

Date: 7/11/2009 1:33:00 AM

Nice one Matt.Thank you for the honour in your contest.It made my day to get a place with a poem on sport.Have a great weekend Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 6/25/2009 7:52:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest Matt...Raul

Date: 6/25/2009 4:03:00 PM

Inspirational use of this concise form. I like the imagery in the first two lines, and the perspective in the last. Good one! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2009 2:39:00 PM

Excellent haiku! Well done, Matt.~

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/25/2009 2:18:00 PM

This reminded me of something I read talking about how human (and every living thing) beings should cooperate with divinity in order to make a un-chaotic world ojojojo thanks a lot for sharing!!=D