Rest Beautiful Mind 2k10

O beloved, liest thy weary head, Unto this imparting inflating chest. Heavy eyes, pleasant dreams simply ahead; A beateous mind need get its due rest.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2011 9:45:00 PM

Yes dear fellow poet, you have said so well what the weary head should do. The pleasant dreams part is the best of all.!

Judy Ball

Date: 7/13/2011 4:58:00 PM

Very beautifully said my friend. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 7/6/2011 2:32:00 AM

Thanks to all of the poets whom have taken the time to simply read my Quatrain here. A fellow poet, - Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/5/2011 9:25:00 PM

A quite sweet and flowing piece here Anthony.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/30/2011 9:46:00 PM

Well done again. Your poem presents a lovely picture, it has charm and love permeates the lines. Great quatrain! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem today. Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2011 3:54:00 PM

Very romantic work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..The Haiku about the Giraffe is not exactly a good Haiku..I plan on working on it..It needs to make a point but I can't make up my mind in which way to go..Thanks for saying that you enjoyed it..Sara

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Date: 7/3/2011 1:29:00 PM

I still liked it though.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Date: 7/3/2011 1:29:00 PM

I still liked it though.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/17/2011 6:04:00 PM

Creative and dreamy write, Anthony