Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Response To Poetry Response

You are making sound yet I strain to hear
reflecting back words with a broken mirror

All I can see is a distorted smile
It will improve when you live for a while

I don't know you at all we haven't met
Tricks aren't Magic they're a deceptive net

Happy to join you in palace or shack
dining like a King or eating a Big Mac

Like you I have been in and out of Love
True love now fits me like a custom glove

Only we can choose what will fall apart
Words can be strings that connect the heart

I have been rewritten many a time
reconstituted almost line by line

Poetry is helplful but it doesn't set me free
it is another way that helps me to see

Response to Abdul Malik's "Poetry Response". If you read my "Poetry" poem
then Malik's "Poetry Response" this will make more sense.

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Cecilia Macfarlane January 23, 2013 at 1:16 PM Great response Rick...it's cool how you and Abdul did this. Hugs Richard Lamoureux January 23, 2013 at 1:45 PM Thanks Cecilia, if you write me a Poem I am happy to respond.

Abdul Malik Mandani January 21, 2013 at 3:55 PM Hey Richard, this is a good response. You are one up! You match my spirit. Glad we did this. Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2013 at 7:00 AM Thanks Abdul

Lucilla Carrillo January 21, 2013 at 3:19 PM I just love it. I already read his. Now I'm reading yours. let me tell you - you are good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 3:35 PM You are making me blush, thanks

Poet Destroyer A January 21, 2013 at 3:08 PM I like the response... interesting... pd Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 3:34 PM Hi Linda I like the new picture.

Sukmawati Komala January 21, 2013 at 9:46 AM amazing poem dear Richard... enjoyed it much.. thanks for your nice sharing <3 Sk Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 3:36 PM Thanks for your nice visit and for reading my poems

Eileen Manassian January 21, 2013 at 9:21 AM Richard...I think line two starts with reflecting...typo! Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 9:30 AM Thanks Eileen

Harry Horsman January 21, 2013 at 9:01 AM been there done that,, and yes you keep on making sense,, and bloody brilliant poetry.... Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2013 at 9:05 AM Thanks Harry, having a poetic Dialogue is a lot of fun. If you wrie me a Poem I would be happy to respond. Have a great day Harry. I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.