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Response To Poetry Response

You are making sound yet I strain to hear reflecting back words with a broken mirror All I can see is a distorted smile It will improve when you live for a while I don't know you at all we haven't met Tricks aren't Magic they're a deceptive net Happy to join you in palace or shack dining like a King or eating a Big Mac Like you I have been in and out of Love True love now fits me like a custom glove Only we can choose what will fall apart Words can be strings that connect the heart I have been rewritten many a time reconstituted almost line by line Poetry is helplful but it doesn't set me free it is another way that helps me to see Response to Abdul Malik's "Poetry Response". If you read my "Poetry" poem then Malik's "Poetry Response" this will make more sense.

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/23/2013 1:16:00 PM

Great response Rick...it's cool how you and Abdul did this. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2013 1:45:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia, if you write me a Poem I am happy to respond.

Abdul Malik

Date: 1/21/2013 3:55:00 PM

Hey Richard, this is a good response. You are one up! You match my spirit. Glad we did this.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2013 7:00:00 AM

Thanks Abdul

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/21/2013 3:19:00 PM

I just love it. I already read his. Now I'm reading yours. let me tell you - you are good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2013 3:35:00 PM

You are making me blush, thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/21/2013 3:08:00 PM

I like the response... interesting... pd

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2013 3:34:00 PM

Hi Linda I like the new picture.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 1/21/2013 9:46:00 AM

amazing poem dear Richard... enjoyed it much.. thanks for your nice sharing <3 Sk

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2013 3:36:00 PM

Thanks for your nice visit and for reading my poems

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/21/2013 9:21:00 AM

Richard...I think line two starts with reflecting...typo!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2013 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Eileen

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/21/2013 9:01:00 AM

been there done that,, and yes you keep on making sense,, and bloody brilliant poetry....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2013 9:05:00 AM

Thanks Harry, having a poetic Dialogue is a lot of fun. If you wrie me a Poem I would be happy to respond. Have a great day Harry. I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.