Respite From The Cold

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Date written: 01/12/2025

wind groaning in pain quite chilly winter gloaming ~ cozy near the hearth

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/22/2025 3:52:00 AM

Nice Haiku. I like short poems that make a picture like you made here. And I like the sounds too (groaning and gloaming) and near the hearth just brings me indoors gladly (hearth and cozy are evocative words of welcome to me). J :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/22/2025 5:09:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and comment, Jeanette:-) I'm glad you enjoyed this haiku. Blessings to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2025 2:31:00 PM

Nothing like that cozy part despite the gloom

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/22/2025 5:07:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful visit, Andrea:-)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/12/2025 5:56:00 PM

Excellent Haiku. I can feel the cold and warmth

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/12/2025 6:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Oliver:-)