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Respite

melancholy days approach;
escape where?  In naked woods?
where do winds wail around
the hilly slopes?
where ash, maple, and oak abound?
I see a dazzling blaze,
a kindling world,
as fires leap everywhere
all over the hemispheres,
where fatal booby traps are sprung,
where bombs fall without respite.
now, where can I escape?
Suddenly, night fell, and everything was quiet;
from somewhere, a bird sang.
I remembered Robert Browning’s words.
“God is in Heaven, all’s right with the world.”*

(from Pippa passes by Robert Browning)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 3:57 AM
Dear victor, this is a poem that is truly fitting for the world and mood right now and is also uplifting and powerful! So much goin on in the world and one can only keep faith close and wish for the best
Tor Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Such wonderful thoughts of a place of paradise to escape this ugly world. Great message sent here Victor. Thanks for sharing my friend...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Somber yet hopeful! Hugs ~ Kim
Buehler Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:41 AM
This is a wonderful poem, and a fave, dear Victor. :)
Poet Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 6:48 AM
The contrast between the calm of nature and the worldwide anarchy seemed beautiful to me. It is just stunning. In the stillness of the night, the one last song of the birds is so innocent—a juxtaposition well executed!
Williams Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Dearest Victor your beautiful poem with the interesting lines of the wailing winds and leaping fires evoke a sense of urgency and unease, while the sudden calm and the bird’s song bring a poignant sense of solace. Ending with Browning’s words adds a timeless, reflective quality. A fave for me...Hugs
Kitchin Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Victor, nicely done with a great ending.
Turner Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Luke 12:25 "Who of you by worrying can add a single hour to your life?" Hopefully soon the bombs will no longer be falling. Great to read your thoughts again, Victor. I hope all is well with you.
Rose  Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 12:30 PM
All is right with this world when all is right with our soul Victor, beautiful words :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:48 AM
I really like this, Victor
Read Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 8:23 AM
A thought provoking poem Victor, have a lovely evening dear friend.
Cunningham Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Uplifting and inspiring Victor, well composed Tom
Messina Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Inspiring write, Victor. There is hope out there! Charlie
Rodgers Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:29 AM
Dear Victor, a masterpiece of contrasts! I loved the imagery of global chaos mixed with nature's serenity. Quite breathtaking. That final bird's song amidst the quiet night - is so pure. Yes, finding peace in turmoil is the question. We find that peace in God our Father! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rolland Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 3:15 AM
i had the same inspiration three years ago, and wrote a poem, this is quite true and touching, don't know if i have posted my poem on Soup, will look for thanks poet for the delicate poem
Manassian Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 3:00 AM
Wonderful ending. I am experiencing all that you have written about, Victor. I also turn to God for respite. Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing.
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:45 AM
- Sounds like in the front yard of hell ... but suddenly the light shines :) - A slightly overwhelming poem, Victor :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
M  Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 1:23 AM
Interesting poem with inspiring ending Victor! Cuddles.. Debx
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