Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Resolutions

As autumns of dear life, I endeavor to face,
Reminiscing in springs, memories I retrace;
Cognizant that splendor of seasons will end,
Seeking amends, life’s goodwill I befriend;

Resolving to shed grimness trapped in yore,
Discarding grievances, hatefulness I abhor,
Filling voids with wisdom of enlightened soul,
Welcoming endearment aging vibes cajole.

Harmony I shall hoist, to apex of its tempo,
Strumming mirthfully rhythms of tomorrow,
Freed from obscurity of yesterday’s shadow
Rejoicing with family on life’s sunlit meadow.

Hosting sentiments that elucidate life anew,
Ethereal I wish to woo~ revered, and true,
Pleading for bliss of heaven, eternal as time,
Living and letting live, in tranquility sublime.

Disavowing shackles of material, mundane,
Compassion I’ll chase of benevolent domain
Redressing incongruence, vying virtues divine,
Steering autumns of my life till values align.
 
December 22, 2022
Placed 3rd: Resolutions for 2023 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Evelyn Judy Buehler August 29, 2023 at 11:46 AM Wonderful resolutions pervade your beautifully imagined poem, Vijay. Belated congratulations.

Paula Goldsmith January 5, 2023 at 9:13 AM Back with "Congratulations" on your win. Another year with Resolutions. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Sotto Poet January 5, 2023 at 7:26 AM Back with congratulation on your win, Vijay. A very impressive piece of writing. May you have a day filled with blessings as you continue to write.

Pashang Salehi January 2, 2023 at 10:11 AM Nicely done my friend. Happy new year and good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2023 at 12:46 PM This took a great deal of good thought and reflection. Well done. Best of luck in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues January 1, 2023 at 5:58 AM Seeking amends, life’s goodwill I befriend… Discarding grievances, hatefulness I abhor, Steering autumns of my life till values align - I can so relate! I really like this, Vijay! Saving as a fave, my friend!

Heidi Sands December 31, 2022 at 8:42 PM Very nice to read tonight, on New Year's Eve! I look forward to your beautiful writing, as you are so talented and write favorites like this. Thank you Vijay. I wish you peace and happiness in the New Year. Blessings:)

Sotto Poet December 29, 2022 at 8:38 AM Vijay, you have a wonderful talent to create creative things, and I agree with all of your ambitions. You have a natural gift for poetry.  What a well-thought-out and well-executed piece of writing. The more you read, the more you become engrossed. Consideration should be given with seriousness and depth. Excellent work all around!

Ken Rone December 26, 2022 at 9:27 AM Dear Vijay: My very, very, best wishes for a warm Holiday season to you and your family. May its many blessings abound for you. Thank you for your support. There have been terrible times for our world and I pray peace will come soon to Ukraine. Best - Ken Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 1:17 PM My best to you, Ken, for the festive season. Blessings to you my friend. I share you sentiments about the world and Ukraine. Praying for relief. Many thanks for stopping by, Ken.

Paula Goldsmith December 25, 2022 at 1:19 PM Enjoyed your write. Resolutions, many are made and many are broken. A Happy/Blessed New Year 2023................ Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:58 AM Happy New Year to you as well, Paula. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Joseph P. DiMino December 23, 2022 at 10:49 AM "Steering autumns of my life till values align." If we get that write, then one has succeeded at everything. Such a thoughtful and well crafted work. Can't help but read and be pushed into deeper. meaningful thought. Excellent write! Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:57 AM You are so right about the ending line--glad you focused on that thought, Joe. Much appreciate your insights. Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick December 23, 2022 at 7:41 AM I have decided it is best to not become materialistic but let life be lived in the simplest way possible. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:56 AM Simplest way is the best way---I appreciate your thoughtful remarks, Sara. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar December 23, 2022 at 7:05 AM My resolutions are simple. Do good. Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:55 AM Sounds good, Victor. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose December 23, 2022 at 5:55 AM You are a virtuous poet with a great ability to create amazing writes, love your resolutions Vijay, gl in the contest and Merry Christmas if you celebrate Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:54 AM Merry Christmas (though I am a day late) to you as well, Vienna. Much appreciate. Many thanks for your kind feedback.

JC Brul December 23, 2022 at 4:13 AM A profound resolution captured in an eloquent execution. A sure win! Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:53 AM Thank you JCB--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole December 22, 2022 at 7:28 PM "Freed from obscurity of yesterday’s shadow, rejoicing with family on life’s sunlit meadow." In truth, this is what many should do. Your thoughts are both beautiful and tender. They caress softly around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Vijay. Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:52 AM Blessings to you as well, my friend. Always appreciate your kind insights. Many thanks, Brandy.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 22, 2022 at 4:44 PM Being in the winter of my life, I can better understand someone who starts his trip through Autumn, my dearest friend, Vijay. A poem of philosophical value that probes into the depths of the heart and soul in an amazing poetic way. A FAVE. Blessings and Merry Christmas! Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:51 AM Honored to receive your FAVE my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Demetrios, as always. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham December 22, 2022 at 8:47 AM Resolutions that we should all try and adhere to Vijay. So many give up at the first hurdle. Stunning poetry Vijay, best of luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:50 AM You are so very kind, Tom. Much appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks.

Valsa George December 22, 2022 at 8:29 AM "Harmony I shall hoist, to apex of its tempo,? Strumming mirthfully rhythms of tomorrow,? Freed from obscurity of yesterday’s shadow/ Rejoicing with family on life’s sunlit meadow." Outstanding Resolutions that will give an added beauty and meaning to life. All the best dear friend. Vijay Pandit December 26, 2022 at 8:50 AM Much appreciate your kind insights, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Valsa.