Resisting

So, demon then, think not you’ve won I’m not your prisoner, you hold no key I chose my options with careful thought I will not be yours, rather, be set free Know this for certain, you have no hold No more to tempt me, I will not sway I’ll find my way to escape the cold But, not through you, no not today As I will live, I’ll struggle too But I will never give in to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Omaidin Avatar
January 18, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Goodness, quite a remarkable piece, there is a great depth to this. Thanks for commenting on my haikus, cannot take at in number 3 as you suggested, would change the meaning and I had allowed showered as one syllable! Try saying it fast. ! Déirdre Ó Maidín
Voorhees Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 10:00 AM
Its a nice feeling when you can change an painful scenario into an empowered stance to walk away, not looking back. Well, maybe glancing over the shoulder a bit.... Great write! Much love, Steve
George   Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 6:02 AM
Hi Michael, Words of strong conviction. Lainie
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