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Resigned

There is a rebel -guy hiding somewhere down deep within your fleeting heart; a snake- charmer of broken promises who rushes off and pierces my veins. Although honey-coated words are gone to waste inside your impulsive mind, I’m quick to forget after the ache since the challenge to tame you has become a quest, a dare: but now, my heart resigns from mazes of your puzzle . I whine for luck, burying myself in such games only to slowly understand the difference between wisdom and foolishness: and life changes, my runaway guy, when your tease no longer entices a chase... like so, this raw deal is irrevocably terminated! Nayda Ivette Negron's Resignation Contest 10/6/2016

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Date: 10/12/2016 4:15:00 PM
Congrats Nettle, for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:09:00 AM
I dated this guy, he sure gets around! Well-done, strict and to the pointed point! Good luck in all things ... cayCay
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Date: 10/6/2016 9:58:00 PM
WOW! This is one of my favorite poems of yours, Nette. The line that really touched me was the following: My resigns from the mazes of your puzzle. You are superb. Good luck in the contest, dear.
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Date: 10/6/2016 7:22:00 PM
Wow! An expertly crafted ultimatum. Very good, Nette. :-)
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Date: 10/6/2016 6:51:00 AM
Excellent. Powerfully penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:53:00 PM
Oh Nette, this poem flows so well, I think we can all see ourselves in this in one way or another, through these experiences we learn the real values to cherish, and chase! :) Hugs!
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:14:00 PM
You must have known me in my youth as you described me with all the flaws I carried until I grew up and understood the damage I created...
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Date: 10/5/2016 5:00:00 PM
sounds like a trouble maker... love it Nette. LINDA
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:19:00 PM
That's the attitude--- those alpha men are not worth your while. I like your strong, commanding poem!
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Date: 10/5/2016 4:00:00 PM
ooh Nette I think we are writing about a brother and sister today in our poems lol - powerfully penned:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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