Resignation Leaves

Resignation leaves.
Then inside his room he grieves
sitting on a little chair wearing just his underwear.

Resistance says, “No way!
Never will I go away.”
He is like a bloody hound so stubbornly he stays around!

Resignation throws his hands
in the air, makes no demands.
See him give a little shrug. Someone give that guy a hug!

Resistance has great staying power -
from sun-up till the midnight hour.
He’s water at a constant boil, the “squeaking wheel” that gets the oil!

Resignation’s sure to quit.
Inside his chair he sits and sits.
Resistance, the annoying critter! He at least is no quitter!

Written October 5, 2016
For the Resignation Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron
Now revised for Skat's the 'Premiere Contest NUMBER 15' Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
Awesome imagery and expression!! Congrats Andrea, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 7:13:00 PM
This is a good comparison of these two things. Great personification and well written. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/11/2016 12:30:00 PM
Sounds like Hillary. Is there anything - according to her - she isn't? Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 10/10/2016 3:02:00 AM
Black and white settling into gray. Very clever and good Andrea. ; ) 7
Login to Reply
Date: 10/9/2016 7:12:00 AM
A nice piece as always... goodluck with the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/8/2016 9:01:00 AM
What a joy to read. I've got a smile. Best of luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2016 5:48:00 PM
Andrea, very good and best of luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2016 2:39:00 PM
Love the rhyme and the rhythm. Love the two words you choose to counter each other.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2016 8:27:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, the format and the rhyme scheme were well executed and fun to read.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2016 7:51:00 AM
These are very cool manifestations, the squeaky wheel definitively worth that slick shot of attention.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2016 9:12:00 PM
This really good Andrea. I've never seen this style from you and I like it.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2016 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful write, Andrea :-) Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad