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Residue Wrapped in cellophane and ribbon mocking burned down evergreens Screaming at the shadowed walls as nightmares spurn your toxic dreams Lurking near the bottles filled with endless empty molten fears Dampening the diapers as a mother cries her countless tears Broken weave of tattered sleeve behind the darkness to believe That midnight forms what we conceive in moments cast to only grieve We’ll go dancing nightly in the attic while the moon is rising in the sky If I’m too drunk tell me, I’m so scared your little head will come off in my hands What the heck did you expect for just a speck, a tiny fleck Now hit the deck you wretched wreck as long ago we did suspect Counting money residue on blackened smoldered fingernails As billion dollar babies sing in toothless whining rancid wails Toddlers of the devil’s creed wear shiny plastic floating eyes Now staring at you while you sleep these monsters gather in disguise This poem was inspired by one of my favorite songs, Alice Cooper’s “Billion Dollar Babies” The italicized lines are lyrics from that song. Here is a link to the song: https://youtu.be/6sD8sO0B97I And in case you didn’t know, the other voice you’ll hear singing on the song is Donovan (Mellow Yellow)

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Date: 9/3/2019 5:25:00 PM
YOurs is equally dark and creepy!! I liked Freddie's word for it , Macabre! Alice Cooper was great inspiration for this one. I don't beleive i ever heard it before!! I went to take listen and was not familar to me. I only heard the few of his that made it to the radio station I listened to, and I only recall a few such as School is out forever (loved that one) and Only Women Bleed.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/4/2019 7:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. I just wanted to share after reading your fantastic piece inspired by Alice.
Date: 4/29/2017 5:24:00 AM
(You can embed the YouTube vid after you finished and published your poems) This is wonderful Chris, I LOVE it. Totally in love with this stanza: "Lurking near the bottles filled with // endless empty molten fears // Dampening the diapers as a // mother cries her countless tears"
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:41:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I was sure I could but I don't really know how and am a bit too lazy to figure it out. :) Thanks for always offering such nice thoughts for me.
Date: 4/28/2017 3:20:00 PM
Wow!! This is top-notch macabre poetry, Chris. Even Poe would be proud of this offering. It has a razor edge to it, bites at the edges of our comfort zone. Kudos. Such a brilliant, creative poem, my friend. Love always
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:40:00 AM
Wow, "Even Poe would be proud". What a cool thing to say to me Freddie. I have a special poetic relationship with Poe and your comment means a lot to me.
Date: 4/28/2017 2:07:00 PM
You are stepping it up, my friend! Wow! "Dampening the diapers as a mother cries her countless tears" 7
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Chris Green
Date: 5/1/2017 8:39:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim. Yep, stepping up into the darkness. :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 4/28/2017 11:43:00 AM
An intriguing and welcome departure from what I have seen from you Chris, I really like it. 7 xomo!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/28/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. It is Friday and nothing much happens around here on Fridays so I will post a few darker, weirder ones and see what happens. I am glad you liked this one.
Date: 4/28/2017 11:21:00 AM
Some deep Kimchi here brother, well done Chris...
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Chris Green
Date: 4/28/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.

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