Notes About The Poem

- Reserved Room For You -

The important key

                                   timeless - forever in bloom

                                   Like a special warm feeling

                                       in geometric shapes

                                 Aluminum and stainless metal

                                    in this complicated world

                               Tomorrow's key and tonight's lock -

                                   The door is my heart's face

                              and inside there are several rooms

                            One of the rooms is reserved for you

                                    Literally, the key is yours






04/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Metaphor of Love Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May
1st place in the contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Nice metaphor. Congrats!
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:59 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Lovely, Sunshine. Congrats on your top win.
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:06 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Congratulations , Sunshine, on your win.. Nicely said... hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:20 PM
back to say congratulations on your win :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:05 PM
Anne-Lise beautiful win! Congratulations!;)
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:03 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Congrats on your win for this romantic piece, Anne-Lise. Hugs, John
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:03 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Oh my gosh Anne-Lise if I could have I would have given you a double 1st place, Congratulation on your Win!
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:02 AM
- Many thanks for placing me on your winning list, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 9:36 PM
This is so beautiful... a great romantic metaphor flowing from your pen. I love this ... hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 2:49 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:31 AM
" The door is my heart's face and inside there are several rooms " Beautiful tribute to one who probably is delighting in this one.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 12:26 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thank you...I will open Heart's door and stay in...Very creative write Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 12:25 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:39 AM
WOW! A superb write..a sure TOP win, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:12 AM
- Many thanks Vijay, for your kind visit and your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 6:14 AM
aww how romantic is this Anne-Lise, a joy to read today:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 7:12 AM
- Many thanks Jan, for your kind visit and your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Totally Awesomw Anne Lise.... Best to you for a big win, Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 5:27 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and your lovely comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 4:22 AM
Wow, this one is so nice Anne-Lise! I love it :)
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 5:26 AM
- Many thanks Heidi, for your kind visit and your lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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