Resentful

Charcoal colored eyes
mine have seen so much sorrow
Greiving in the past
my resentments won't subside
nor will my lover forget
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 9:24 PM
MICHAEL, congrats with your featured poem of the week.. Good night~PD
A   Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Very strong, Michael! Things are deep hidden in the eyes. I feel the same way towards my x-.. I look at him with those resentful eyes. He's not getting no forgiveness from me. I truly enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Enjoyed reading your Tanka today. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Michael. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Enjoyed your tanka on resentment.. ¤ Wilma
Roberts Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 10:21 AM
good tanka, much enjoyed
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace