Rescue of innocence

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written 09/06/2024

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you have draped your innocence in the warmth of muslin
your dark eyes speak of your loneliness in this strange land
your lips whisper within yourself your desires
when they should be screaming out loud for justice
do not shed precious tears amongst heartless men
they might just mock you and subjugate you more
an age when most would be unfolding outer petals
you are a flower that has been robbed of its garden
your mother weeps inconsolably at home in her dark lonely room
your world was stolen from you for the pleasure of men
yet darkest corners of life have embers of god’s light
I see you I am here to rescue your innocence
I shall sweep you in strong arms of love and carry you home to safety

to mother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/5/2024 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous win, Dear Poet. Your poems are always having unique ideas and exuding compassion. How powerful the message is! Best wishes ~
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2024 11:07:00 PM
Lovely to have you write always Mala! So happy to receive such kind words!:)
Date: 7/5/2024 7:56:00 AM
A powerful write with a strong message, Krish. Warmest congratulations on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2024 9:17:00 AM
Thanks my friend!!:)
Date: 7/5/2024 1:57:00 AM
Yet another amazing poetry of wonderful thoughts. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Happy writing.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2024 9:17:00 AM
Dear Thriveni Thanks very much! Pleased to receive such words of support!:)
Date: 7/5/2024 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your 4th place win, Krish. Your poem gave me pause for thought as we often live our lives with blinkers on – not wanting to know the plight of the young girls, due to circumstances, forced into the role of womanhood. The final four lines hold promise for the future – the positive influences named, culminating in the ultimate safe haven of the mother figure.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/5/2024 1:29:00 AM
Thanks Suzette!! Great contest!! Yes, there are young girls in this world who are subjected to unspeakable horrors! I wish we can give them a better future!
Date: 6/9/2024 2:59:00 PM
I'm feeling it after reading your poem here. You have a wonderful way with words. Thanks for sharing.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/9/2024 10:01:00 PM
Thanks Benjamin!! Much appreciate your support!
Date: 6/9/2024 1:28:00 PM
A powerful write. "Good Luck" Have a great day writing away..................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/9/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Paula, Many innocent face this terrible reality. Hope the world can find a way, this never happens!
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