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Requited Love

Unto your heart I bequeath my being A thousand deaths, I’d die for you As your dear face is all I’m seeing So, in my heart, I hold you true The sun may die, no more eternal The sky may one day bleed with rain My heart, my love, it shows external To keep you then, from facing pain Alas, my worth is based on presence To hold you close, such strength provides To sense your being, absorb the essence As I look deep within your eyes Oh, see my heart that rages true It dies alone, if not for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/1/2008 5:02:00 PM
Michael - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/31/2008 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations Michael you wonderful talent you. I'm glad to see your name listed on the semi's great write!!!!!! Laura :)
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Date: 10/27/2008 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on your success in PS contest,best wishes for next round Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. I like the flow of the words and the message in this sonnet. The theme is consistent with the title, and it flows throughout the poem quite well. Love is an ever splendid thing. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2008 11:59:00 PM
Congrats on your feature this week Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/26/2008 12:46:00 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet so full of love! Congrats on your well-deserved feature. :) Cheers, Alana
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Date: 9/24/2008 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations Michael on your sonnet "Requited Love" being featured this week. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 4:08:00 PM
This is so very well written. Congratulations on having this beautiful poem featured. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/22/2008 8:10:00 AM
Michael I can't believe I missed this Sonnet - congrats on being featured and God Bless
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Date: 9/22/2008 7:16:00 AM
Wow. Awesome Sonnet! Congratulations Michael on a well deserved featured write! Love, Shar
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