Requiem of the Rising Sun: March 11

Concrete cracks
Bridges snap
The sea descends
            Ranting and raving
On all our heads
 
She throws cars like pebbles
Smashes lives
Leaves mud and broken families
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 8:37 PM
caitlin,,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d.
Campbell Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured
Brown Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caitlin. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, catlin
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace