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Requiem For a Seahorse

On a sultry, sizzling July day
I swear it happened just this way
In a tidal pool, a lifeless seahorse lay

He’d not galloped to meet his fate
But was caught in a wave’s cruel wake
High tide retreated, closed the gate

Oh, to have seen him in his prime
Not corralled by diminishing brine
But free to romp near the shoreline

Confined, he withered, but sparked some thought
Of the delight he might have brought
If, for an aquarium, he’d been bought

Tenderly, I cupped his sad remains
And placed him into the sea again
Where others of his kind were still in reign

Yet, before I could utter my last goodbye
A sudden movement caught my eye
In shock, my elation began to amplify

Kissed by cool sea, this sleeping equine
Proved the strength of his endangered bloodline
By swimming away from the sandy coastline

A once-in-a-lifetime moment for me
I cheered aloud as he trotted out to sea
So ponder this and I’m sure you'll agree

This magical rebirth is a lesson to share
When you think life is beyond a prayer
Just give it some help; hope is still there




*April 17, 2018
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Cozart Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 7:44 AM
What a perfectly charming story, Carolyn. Very brightly written and uplifting.
Lindley Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 11:24 AM
You my friend, remind us that hope always exist- even when we fail to admit, see or know it could.... This is truly a wondrous tale and so well written-even more so that I see it is true! I had my son Justin read it and he immediately asked when we can go there looking for seahorses! A fav is this bright gem..
Gondolf Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 5:05 AM
What a great story told so beautifully, Carolyn.
Callus Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 9:51 AM
You show all the traits of a natural writer and a kind-hearted animal lover, Carolyn! The end stanza contains a wise lesson to share. Hugs // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:37 AM
Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it.
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:10 PM
wow, I love how you told this tale. Did it really happen to you on a shore one day? This is fabulous.
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Yes, it happened quite a few years ago at St. George Island in the Florida Panhandle. I used to go there to collect shells for artwork. I had never seen a seahorse up close before then.
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 9:25 PM
That is such a caring compassionate thing to do Carolyn. I love the story here, and the moral of it. I've nursed many a sick bird that ended up in my garden, and released it back when it was well, such a sense of peace follows. ....Maria Hugs
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Yes, there is a special joy when we feel we've made a difference in a vulnerable creature's life. Thank you, Maria.
Ashley Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Ohh absolutely spectacular, Carolyn.. An inspired write for sure! So many great poetic lines tell a fabulous story of a small but mighty seahorse set free in the sea by compassionate hands. Your rhymes shine in your lovely rhythmic lines.. Best wishes for a win!
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Such a kind comment, Susan. Thank you!
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