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Requesting in-kind

If only creation conceived of her sooner Another name for the Moon might not be lunar Silken charcoal casts an image upon this sheet Artistry, as this commission found, is so complete An evolutionary masterpiece lacking nothing nor insipid To touch beauty such as this is so euphorically intrepid Were I given by a djinn wishes thrice I would invest two in kissing she once, then twice The third; if only for a moment, requesting in-kind If somewhere within her; my Valentine, she'd find

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Date: 2/10/2024 1:54:00 PM
Sweet, reminds me of an angel. Beautiful writing, I absolutely loved the three wishes thing, and the romance of a third kiss in-kind. Perfect trust? Beautiful writing from a beautiful soul.
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 2/10/2024 5:18:00 PM
I would say perfect trust is a very good amicable description of what I was feeling when I wrote this poem. Very intuitive of you! Fondly A.S.

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