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Representation

promised freedoms betrayed -
poverty frolics amid laws….
changing….

Senryu per contest instructions…no capitilzation, commas, or periods
© September 18, 2010
Dane Smith-Johnsen

politicalsenryu

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Daniel Cwiak

September 23, 2010 at 2:53 AM

Truth is always best, Dane Ann. Yours here is the truth that no one is willing to see. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

September 21, 2010 at 6:57 AM

this is so true at this moment in time, congrats to you with this winner.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2010 at 4:32 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2010 at 11:09 PM

Congratulations, Dane ann! LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

September 20, 2010 at 3:52 PM

Summed up the current situation so well Dane Ann. Many congratulations on your fine win >> James

Caryl Muzzey

September 20, 2010 at 3:02 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

September 20, 2010 at 2:38 PM

You must have entered this right after I left for Disneyworld, Dane Ann. Excellent statement about our country today!!! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 20, 2010 at 1:35 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Dane

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 20, 2010 at 1:09 PM

Hi Dane Ann :)-- coming back to say congrats on your win with this senryu :) nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 20, 2010 at 12:07 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in the Senryu contest... an awesome victory my friend.. enjoy today with luv...

Francine Roberts

September 20, 2010 at 10:34 AM

good one, congrats on your win in the contest

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 19, 2010 at 9:19 AM

Hi Dane Ann :) this sure holds so true even in my own country-- so sad really how this seems to happen everywhere-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)