Repost: the Poet's Treasure

The poet dreams, and with a simple glance
at trees or sky or at a mountain spring,
begins to write, endeavors to enhance
each sight of beauty with imagining.

He paints midsummer as a day of gold,
the song of birds at twilight as the tune
for his beloved, whose aspect is extolled
and likened to the splendor of the moon.

At times, his heart is pained.  It seems that doom
pursues him in that chasm where he grieves.
He finds he still must write. . . and there may bloom
sweet wistful roses on his journal’s leaves. 

Though meager be his assets, he bequeaths
to us a treasure with the words he breathes.

Entered 10/22/2020 for Line Gauthier's Have You Published Poetry Contest

From my chapbook: Dancing the Unicorn: Lyrical Blooms 2
I had won a chapbook deal for my Lyrical Blooms 1 entitled Dreaming the Unicorn, and I followed it up with a part 2 Dancing the Unicorn, a 44-page chapbook pubished in 2008 by Shadow Ink. The book contains poems of various themes with about two poems per page and organized by types of poetry forms. Blue roses are scattered through the book. Shadow Ink sadly stopped publishing.

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Date: 11/25/2020 10:00:00 AM
Congrats Andrea--you really do have such a lovely way with words, you make them dance and sing!
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Date: 11/24/2020 3:54:00 AM
Back with congrats, Dear Andrea. LOVE THIS and you ;)
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Date: 11/24/2020 3:36:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published contest with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Date: 11/24/2020 2:16:00 AM
What a gem dear Andrea....Your ink is boundless! Congratulations ..
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Date: 11/23/2020 11:53:00 PM
Glad to see this on Line's winner's list, Andrea. It is a real beauty, and anyone who writes poetry can relate to the imagery and emotions that become the poet's color palette. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 11/23/2020 7:23:00 PM
It's always a pleasure to read your wonderfully crafted poetry, Andrea!!
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Date: 10/23/2020 5:32:00 AM
You bequeath treasures every day, Andrea. A wonderful insight into poets' minds.
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Date: 10/23/2020 5:25:00 AM
"He paints midsummer as a day of gold", Beautifully penned Andrea..
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:22:00 AM
Your poetry always excels. Pity the editor is not coming up with new books. I suppose with this pandemic, money is utilized on food rather than poetry books. ~~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 9:01:00 AM
Not to do with the Plannedmic. She went out of business right before 2010. That is one reason I ended up HERE!
Date: 10/22/2020 10:32:00 PM
I thought it more appropriate to leave you a lengthy comment at the original poem, but this makes a great entry for Line's contest. Thanks for including the explanation of the chapbook this came from! Alas, we shall never see a copy.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 9:02:00 AM
You don't want to see what my last copies look like!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 9:02:00 AM
thanks, John.
Date: 10/22/2020 7:23:00 PM
Lovely words from a lovely lady... Such a blessing and treasure to experience... like a painting of inspirational thoughts on the heart... Love this. God bless you with many more amazing writes, dear Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2020 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful , Andrea, Line will love it. Sorry about the book. Maybe you could go back and have them republish the book. Hugs Eve
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 8:58:00 AM
Marie Summers got out of publishing and stopped selling our books. All I have are a few really tattered old copies with water stains on them!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 8:58:00 AM
thanks , Eve
Date: 10/22/2020 5:43:00 PM
Very nice reflection on the art of writing poetry, something close to my heart. Nice rhyming.
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You penned such a good entry for the contest. The portrait you painted with words is beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. PS, I was going to ask how I could get a copy your poems.Was it chap for school? Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 9:00:00 AM
I have only two tattered copies left, I did not even save a pristine one for myself. I could just kick myself. They are stained and lacking the colored roses on the pages because they were samples pre-publishing. I had 8 chapbooks published by Marie and only a few with good copies remaining. I am up for chapbook exchanges. Do you have a chapbook, Alexis?
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