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Repeat Offender (A Gift For Ms. Guzzi)

I have a box with forgotten words And punctuation seldom used In this box are synonyms And grammar I’ve abused There are commas there and colons too Apostrophes spilling out the top But the one thing there that I’ve got most Are unused periods to make a sentence stop I have one friend this bugs the most Says no periods make my poems fuzzy So I’ve collected them all and present them now To the wonderful Deborah Guzzi …………………………………………………………………….. …………………………………………………………………….. …………………………………………………………………….. …………………………………………………………………….. …………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………… Please feel free to apply them now To my poems written in the past I know it’s an offense I’m repeating again But, I assure you this won’t be the last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/1/2010 4:38:00 PM
Good job..Enjoyed the write..Got a chuckle.. You could add a line for me for I slaughter the English language and the grammar, also..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2010 10:19:00 AM
too funny
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