Bj Legros Kelley Poet Rhyme

Renewed

                                  Shaking off sad leaves still clinging, 
                                        singing of the summer gone,
                                    For seasons change, and so do we, 
                                       Embrace now, golden dawn

                        The sunrise on the desert rises boldly, golden hued,
                                Reminds of life eternal, past the darkness
                                                    Night construed  
                                        Day is born, the world spins
                                                  Hope born again 
                                                          Renewed







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Valsa George October 8, 2026 at 5:43 AM As far as hope is not gone, there is everything though seemingly there is nothing. After every sunset, there happens a sunrise. Life, like the seasons is cyclic. A very inspirational poem dear BJ.

Sara Kendrick October 8, 2026 at 5:30 AM Your descriptive and expressive work is excellent. I see a deeper meaning within the lines as well. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K. 👏✍️

Sotto Poet October 8, 2026 at 2:33 AM This piece beautifully captures the cyclic nature of life and the resilience within us to embrace each new beginning. The imagery of seasons, sunrise, and renewal weaves a sense of hope and transformation with gentle elegance. Truly inspiring.

Tom Cunningham October 8, 2026 at 12:34 AM Reads like a prayer BJ. Hope your week is going well. Tom🌹

Gershon Wolf October 7, 2026 at 8:54 PM The contrast of your images has my head spinning!! Wow! ~ Dizzy Juan

I Am Anaya October 7, 2026 at 5:49 PM A delicate airiness, the sun ☀️🌞 always rises. Hope is here, everywhere ~enjoyed Immensely..Liked

Heidi Sands October 7, 2026 at 5:07 PM Very nice. Inspiring and refreshing. Thanks for sharing :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 7, 2026 at 5:01 PM Your poem is filled with sensual delight and lovely images, such as those in the first two lines, Bj. This is a fave. 😊✍️