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'renewal'

bolts of thunder light up the sky
splash of colour visible as rain fall
rain supply its own kind of music
lyrics the trees sway and dance to 
as flowers smile after months of drought
one thing on nature's mind is renewal
it is time to enjoy every facet...

03/05/2011

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James Fraser Date: 5/7/2011 1:42:00 PM The rains in fall on the Serengeti lands, their impending approach is in natures plans. From barren to lush, brings this droplets of pure. Seasonal they are, but will it remain her renewing cure. Terrific poetry Wilma, I love it....:) Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/6/2011 11:01:00 AM Throughout this poem I sense the sounds of thunderstorms as well as the soft percusionary sounds of rain hitting various objects. The flowers smiling as the earth is newly splashed with colors is gorgeous. Enjoyed every facet of this poem. Great poem and nice form chosen too. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/5/2011 1:29:00 PM Pure excellence in this piece... awake and refreshed is the feeling I get... Such amazing work for The other "amazing crazy" lol luv Michael Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/4/2011 9:32:00 PM oo.. good luck in the contest... sure enjoyed... take care... and i asume its moring in your part of the world... bye,..p.d. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/4/2011 6:36:00 PM What a perspective to write on the theme as you like it with a pleasant aspect of the nature, Wilma Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/4/2011 11:52:00 AM a very fine refreshing piece of creative poetry, that touches the inner soul. Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 5/3/2011 8:11:00 PM Love it Sweet. it reinds me of the rainy season when you can smell it in the air. Africa the best. XXX Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/3/2011 4:47:00 PM Brilliant description of the lightning and an uplifting message about the renewal rain affords to all of the Earth. Excellent, dear Wilma. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/3/2011 2:11:00 PM ahhh, enjoy every facet. VERY nicely said, wilma. A sweet poem on spring! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/3/2011 12:30:00 PM wonderful poem,Wilma.Is it raining too much there?Send some this way---kash Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/3/2011 7:37:00 AM Renewal is like a breath of fresh air Wilma and these lines indicate time for renewed energies as Spring is here with all the facets in your lovely poetry .. enjoyed my friend..luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/3/2011 4:30:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Wilma. I will be back again soon to read more. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol Login to Reply